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Zerius1232yrCommented"Multiple Leviathan class life forms detected. Are you sure that whatever you are doing is worth it?" is how I perceive Fenagar
Fenagar the Leviathan, Zagran the Garuda, and Roghar the Fenrir sat together at a round table for the first time in a long while. All pieces of furniture were made from a single dead branch of the World Tree.- Zerius1233yrCommentedThen, he merged the five cores together, using the slime good from time to time to reduce the rejection effect that the different energies caused. Slimes were incredible creatures with amazing vitality and capable of adapting to any environment.
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Alas, we await the new chapter!
The power core would not only fuel all enchantments, but also hold the other pseudo cores together, keep them from clashing with each other, and turn the world energy into mana bearing Lith's energy signature. - Zerius1233yrCommented
Jesus, all this detail is like he's making a feast for a family of ten.
Also, he set a bowl of slime goop to use it as a stabilizer during the various Forgemastering steps, a petal of the Golden Phoenix flower that the dryads had gifted him years ago, and a Thunderbird's plume to boost the base material's defensive properties. - Zerius1233yrCommented
Excellent use of world detail
Nalrond and the Ernas found the process far from boring. Under Lith's control, the mystical flames danced around the Adamant and seeped into it, moving akin to a living being, sometimes even giving the spectators the impression to see visions of primordial times, back when Mogar was still a lava planet. - Zerius1233yrCommented
Damn, my mood went from, "HOLY DAMN!" to "O-oh... okay..."
Lith recognized Feela the Behemot's voice, the beasts' representative in the Council and leader of their faction. - Zerius1233yrCommented
I think the grammar might be confusing people, so I suppose just let it be if you're too serious. Every small tiny change being attacked is like nagging at a cook for a small crumb on a meal. I'm going to read this and enjoy it, pleasures mine if you disagree with me because people write differently and some things are harder to understand than others. Alas, may the day be joyous to all and let the day be solaced.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Zerius1233yrCommented
Is it just me or am I just pronouncing Phloria as Flora ?
'If there really is a guiding hand behind all the hurdles we have faced so far, then the mastermind's next step would be testing us individually. Phloria is the best partner I could ask for. She is strong, smart, resourceful, and I don't have to hold back in front of her.' Lith thought. - Zerius1233yrCommented
Well, why not get rid of them now? A group of old crooks don't need to be there. In fact, they are weighing Lith and the two ladies down.
To her, a bunch of suicidal idiots wasn't worth the risk of a lifetime of solitude. - Zerius1233yrCommented
I actually feel hurt when I read this.
The huntress had moved away years ago, yet Lith returned there from time to time, hoping to learn what had happened to the woman who had taught him how to hunt back when he was still a kid and to his first true friend, Protector. - Zerius1233yrCommented
Wow! Is all I can say, but like, when Lith was unconscious and stuff, I was terrified, but whenever Lith feels calm I too feel calm. It's really a wonder to experience a feeling like the character(s) in a story. If, just for once people actually acknowledged Lith is scarred more than the average person, then maybe they'd keep reading to see if he gets a better life. Legion said at the start that this story wouldn't be a hero, villain protagonist rodeo, but growth can make something similar and that's life. Accepting it can be tough, but when you learn that you can live for others' sake, you begin to appreciate your life and the things you have. Please don't be a cliche and make him negative ahead.
It made her incredibly happy and scared at the same time. Because in the end, Protector had made a huge mistake. Lying to Lith to protect him had been the wrong thing to do. It was up to her to make things right. - Zerius1233yrCommentedCh 88 There and Back Again
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To experience a new story always brings a meaning to my days. When I read the story, I felt it become 'alive' like it was a real world changing at each passing. Each word grasping my yearning and attention for more. The development of Supreme Magus felt surreal like a true fantasy story. Albeit, I do find the World Background lacking, but that's just me. When the character grows, I always find myself wanting more development and I love that urge. In addition to these factors, I felt as though the stability of updates was one I could never catch up to. To me, the plot, the world, the writing, the character were all on top notch with the author. I have not felt the craving for more story of a book of such high quality in years.
- Zerius1233yrReplied to Timezone
Again, reincarnation is a wonder.
After that, he shifted his night training on focus and control rather than power. His mana was very limited and he much preferred doing a few elaborate tricks perfectly rather than a lot of stuff at the risk of blowing his cover. - Zerius1233yrCommented
Should I be glad Jake isn't real?
The guy fainted and as I held his chest, his heartbeat was gone. I ate the skin, consuming it, and wiped my mouth as I ran to the far back of the school. - Zerius1233yrCommented
Ouch...
Jake kicked her knee cap on the right, making her kneel and covered her mouth. - Zerius1233yrReplied to Great_Panda
I use a lot of energy to write and writing 5k words a day will make me hungry, thirsty and plain exhausted, but I suppose the more you write the more you adapt. I usually wrote 1k words a day, but slowly I'm rising.
The second goal is to be able to write approximately five thousand words every day. Simply speaking, you must be able to write quickly. - Zerius1233yrCommented
I believe this is just a general long term goal, so, I guess it's saying "Keep writing a lot until you can achieve the goal,"
The second goal is to be able to write approximately five thousand words every day. Simply speaking, you must be able to write quickly. - Zerius1233yrCommented
So, I get we don't need to write 500k words since you're simply trying to say that long novels are what we need.
The first goal is to be able to imagine and finish a story that's approximately 500,000 words. Simply speaking, you have to be able to write long novels. - Zerius1233yrCommented
Truly splendid! The excellent use of musical vocabulary causes one to enjoy thine works in harmony.
My fingers possessed by this feeling continued to play until the coda where they slowed before climbing once again. Tiptoeing eagerly until the very final note, concluding the first movement in a triumphant cry. This feeling drop-kicked to the moon as I heard a resounding clap fill the air. Dragged back to earth, I remembered both Jishi, and that girl were here.