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I still intend to talk a little bit about how is the personality of her and some other friends of Akira. She has more friends have a less shy personality than in the anime.
English is not my first language and as I am using some applications to translate probably these grammar errors will happen.
In fact he has a very different look from Gaara the only similarity between them is the gourd on his back, however it is necessary so that he can always use his skill more efficiently.
Well, I really need to fix that part of his D size. As for the question of controlling the size of the D I intend to edit the chapter he chooses the wishes and that is one of the wishes he will ask after I edit.
Just because I think cool and because in the anime have the clan Iburi that can turn body parts into smoke so I took this idea of the dojutsu of their clan.
It's going to be possible, but not yet since he hasn't trained that yet.
On this same site the name Portuguese is: Akira in the Naruto Universe with crocodile's abilities.
Nesse mesmo site e com a mesma conta o nome em português é: Akira no Universo de Naruto com as habilidades do Crocodile.
In fact the 2nd wish and the 3rd are very different things, just because a woman feels desire for him does not mean that she will feel good talking to him, the 3rd desire is more focused to make women can open up to him, basically it is to make it easier for them to fall in love with him, while the 2nd will make it easier for him to take her to bed. I don't know if I could explain it very well, but I think you can understand. As for why he didn't ask for an incubus lineage it was simply because I didn't think about it and yet I don't like it very much either.
English is not my first language, I originally posted this story in Portuguese, but I decided to post it in English as well. I'm using some translation apps to post in English.