I have no words-

My heart hurts I hate this

Im about to cry

The chapter is good but some paragraphs are a little too wordy and confusing, I suggest to try and clarify the picture the character is trying to paint. Great chapter by the way, just needs more work 🖤

Every fiber*

Third*

The throd sentence is a bit confusing, maybe go over it and clarify what you meant?

The feelings of wanting to see her again suppressed all other emotions*

The ecoless sound was a source of energy for me. They helped me gather strength, but that strength was enough for me to stand up, but my legs were still numb*

With temporary memory loss,*

Now that I think about it, this world is like a final test*

They try to speak when they are still infants*

I tried to stand on my feet again, only to fall back down to my knees*

Walking into an unknown world, unaware of the gifts and dangers this world had to offer*

There’s a spaced typo here

Saw your comment for a free proof reader, I’ll help you out 🖤

The sound*

I-

This chapter made so happy omg it was cute 😭

He is so disgusting