Very descriptive writing. i like the style of this author, with very high potential! please keep up the hardwork!! [img=update] [img=update]

I like how the female lead is a weapon contractor, and how the two male leads, one is an angel and the other is a demon. The plot is awesome,

most other teachers are against Jolande as well, only a few werent

she would get something like 70/100 in some subjects, but other teachers might push her to 100/100 because she is a great student

yes

sarah was a therapist, meaning she knows how to work with people with different personalities, she could convince them easily after jolande introduced her to them in a way to seem trusted.

you either bring the right gift or dont, i have been once to china, and they dont accept casual gifts

thanks for pointing

they had the slide in the amulet

will be explained later :)

This story is going smooth like a river, this story is worth reading, and the title is catchy. Writing style is unique and the characters are well made. Deserves a stone!

The story has a catchy title, and the story-telling is probably better than most novels out there. The introduction to the story, writing quality, story-telling, all add up to 5 stars, great work

Thanks for your feedback

I'm very happy to hear out!

I've updated it, I meant the accelerating car pedal, thanks for noticing

iPAQ is a portable computer, I had one and I still have it, go look for "iPAQ" on google, have fun reading!