Rake_Cake

A very well written story indeed. I can see this story going very far in terms of success in the future. All the best to the author, who hopefully keeps writing these amazing stories that capture me every time [img=recommend]

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the way you engage with your characters is amazing. I love the way i myself can have a voice in the story. You may need to add a bit more work with using other genders as well while writing as many other people will read it.