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I agree more with this idea, Author. I'm also not in favor of whether or not Kazir's mother dies. Also, I feel that his character may find a path of redemption since we now know the mother's hatred for Kazir's father. I know it may sound strong but one idea is to risk the health of the daughter (Kazir's sister) with the situation that happened with Weinstein. The only one who knows about this event is Kazir. That is where he will decide which way to go. The mother will also be able to live as her daughter is at risk.

It's also good to think, you're in the DC world. I think where the MC is is one of the quietest places and where he can adapt to his powers without anyone noticing.

I feel that for him. It would be to play the role of Jaime Lannister. His blond hair would help him to belong to house Lannister.

I think you should continue with just the plot chapters where we see Will and Alex. I really like the story you are writing, I mean it. I love this series and to see a novel that is going well I love it. I would say that if you want you can take the rest of the year off so you can do your thing and not get overwhelmed with getting chapters out every week. My option would be to take a few weeks off from writing so you can do your own thing without stressing out.

I liked the chapter. I found it interesting how you covered the problem of Will and his parents. I feel that this same problem can be overcome with Alex's help by being in the sad moments with him. An example I would give would be when it's Will's birthday. For some reason the parents don't make it but Alex and Will's family do. I think that problem could be the low point for Will's own parents to realize their own mistakes. I'm loving your story bro. I hope you keep uploading more chapters.

The development of a character depends on the author and the plot of the story. Alex begins as a character who is a know-it-all and feels misunderstood by her family. Her character starts to develop in those episodes where she is the one who learns the lesson at the end of the episode. Within this story the accompanying character of Will is becoming her support that she is not the only smart one in her crazy family. Will is the person who is marking her mistakes, someone to listen to, to understand. Will's involvement with the other members of the family was perfect as was Will's confession to Alex. I liked that they didn't instantly become boyfriend and girlfriend and especially in front of Claire.

I'm really liking the fanfic you are writing. Modern family is one of my favorite series along with The big bang Theory and friends. The way you started the relationship between Will and Alex I liked it. Alex is one of my favorite characters. I didn't really like the relationships Alex had in the series. Most if not all of them didn't give Alex's character development. Not like it was with Haley. I am continuing with this story I am loving it so much.

In which chapter does this scene appear?

The translation would be into Spanish. As for the place it would be in Wattpad.

Hi. I really loved your GOT story. It is one of my favorite series. The way you set up the plot and the characters is very good. I wanted to ask your permission to translate your story. Of course, at the beginning of each chapter there will be a thank you to the original author. If you don't want this translation to be done, nothing will be done. Thank you.