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SarushiroEruma

SarushiroEruma

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Creative Writer. Novelist. And anything behind the scenes. "I am no critic. I merely reflect on the world through imagination." ig: @eruma_sarushiro

2020-10-12 JoinedPhilippines
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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma13d
    Posted

    First impression sort of reminds me of the nonfiction novel I read years ago called "the game" by neil strauss. Lots of useful life lessons in here. But, the magic of this story presents itself when the theme suddenly twists into something surprisingly more interesting and enjoyable. Fun MC, well constructed plot, and "Handsomely" done, author-sensei! Keep updating.. really looking forward to this [img=recommend]

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma14d
    Replied to tanu_sam

    I was referring to the torture scene and your little disclaimer note at the end of chapter3

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma14d
    Posted

    Interesting take on the world of organized crime and romance within the gangs of the east coast. The way everything is described seems almost everything lives and breathes. I know not everyone's a big fan of violence, but even that is incredibly graphic to the point where one can feel the actual dreadful sensations.. which is a good thing if we're to set things up for a realistic story revolving the mafia. The pacing is just right that the story develops fast enough for the readers to understand how this magnificent plot is being presented.. not much dialogue in the beginning.. but more well constructed and detailed explanations for viewers to understand the complexity of what is really going on. Overall, the quality of this work is brilliantly done. The author's skill in storytelling has great potential.. and is arguably one of the better ones I've seen in this platform. Great job, author-sensei! Keep updating and inspiring your readers!

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma14d
    Commented

    I don't mind the violence. It being this graphic here make the story more realistically interesting [img=recommend]

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma16d
    Replied to Grey_Turner

    thank you!!!

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma17d
    Commented

    whoa. I missed that. thanks! fixed[img=recommend]

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma18d
    Replied to Aaron_McLeod_1690

    glad someone understood what I discretely implied there😅

    "Of course she'd be on her way, and I'll be carrying her heavy load..", Seijurou talked to himself painstakingly as he read Satsuki's message. "Come to think of it, I'm getting stronger because of that."
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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Replied to Mesha_Aja

    I'll update on Sunday. Just taking a break after the firsr volume [img=recommend]

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Posted

    The story gives one a sense that the world can truly be scary; and that in itself speaks of the author's ingenuity in crafting the cunning world of a real "asian dragon". The characters are well portrayed by the wording. Not to mention, the family dynamics of the Longs and the Xins fit almost perfectly in what the eastern nobility would look like. It's a great read, overall. Every chapter makes the reader look for more information that can potentially destroy each other's adversaries. And oh.. did I mention anything about this story's strong and dominating female lead? Very attractive really.. Keep up the good work, author-sensei! This one has the potential to be up there[img=recommend]

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Commented

    ohh..

    "As a matter of fact, I did, but Father I don't care what her father does or where she went to school or what her favorite color is or which brand she likes or what her shoe number is. The one thing I wished to know wasn't in that file. For all I know, Xin Zhenyi could look like a coronavirus ."
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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Posted

    Just about the right mix of fantastical elements and mysterious crime fiction.. Set right at the aftermath of World War II, the narrative does a pretty good job in transporting the readers in a mid twentieth century and gang infested eastern United States through "underworldish" imaginative fantasy. The uniqueness of the story has the potential to be one of those within the top. Keep updating, author! This is a great piece of art.

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Commented

    tbh, transitions are my weak point. currently practicing different techniques on how to improve it. it warms my heart that an established author in this platform took the time to give me a good and honest feedback. so yeah, thanks! and I'll check your work too!

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Replied to DaoistsHh6mm

    oh no need to say sorry man! good long and honest feedback is what I think I need since I'm just starting to upload my novel. this gives me a really good chance to improve my writing👌

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Commented

    thank you for the feedback!

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Replied to DaoistsHh6mm

    cool man. I really appreciate the time and effort for giving this feedback. thanks! I'll work on it[img=recommend]

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Replied to DaoistsHh6mm

    thank you for the honest review. I actually really appreciate these kinds of feedback, so I can further improve my work. let me know if you still have something else in mind. I'll try my best to address some issues right away[img=recommend]

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Replied to Belg4r

    oh wow. thanks! fixed it

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Commented

    looking forward to the continuation of this, author-sensei[img=recommend]

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Commented

    can't wait bro[img=recommend]

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  • SarushiroEruma
    SarushiroEruma1mth
    Replied to Bob_Joe

    thank you for the first review[img=recommend]

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