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Mistaken_Smile12dCommentedis he an idiot?
If I contact the administrator, I can explain the situation.- Mistaken_Smile12dReplied to Kash_108
pretty sure any A rank demolishes
All said and done, at the end of the tenth year, I was now prepared with each of my skills along with external martial arts and weapon training. I was like now an army or maybe more who could probably annihilate every major force back on earth. - Mistaken_Smile1mthPosted
- Mistaken_Smile1mthReplied to TheOneTruePanda
100% agreed, it's like oh I saw someone die once now I'm gonna make a magical creature that will take away all the magic in the world
"Difficult is an understatement, it's an insane plan that I've embraced like those before me. Sometimes, I wonder if I'm insane for agreeing to participate in such a plan," Asterion buried his head in the hollow between her breasts, his tone tinged with sarcasm. - Mistaken_Smile1mthCommented
not the worst name I've seen. this one fanfic thought that naming their MC goofy would be a good idea, I read the synopsis and didn't give it a second look
[đČđđ đ«đđđđ] [đșđđđđđ] - Mistaken_Smile2mthCommented
you're adding characters like Luffy and still think your character is gonna measure up with what is basically a minor enhancement quirk?
(Author- Hey, I hope you all enjoy! I enjoyed writing this! Listened and vibe to 'Uchiha Rap: Red' by Rustage the whole time. It's a straight vibe. Go check it out! Link in this paragraph comment!) - Mistaken_Smile2mthCommented
still don't get why they don't have chakra. even if you wanted to nerf the characters they should still have chakra since they wished for the powers of Madara, obito, and itachi
(I will now start implementing the romance a little bit more heavily. I am a new writer so I may not write the best romance. If there is anything that is cringe, or that you don't like the please comment. I read all the comments and consider what they say seriously. - Mistaken_Smile2mthCommented
it's Yeah not yah
Itachi and I on the other hand were sat on the left side of the room with me directly in front of him near the window. Hell yah the edgy seat! - Mistaken_Smile2mthCommented
fire the editor
[A Rank Fire Style-Fire Deagon Jutsu bought] - Mistaken_Smile2mthCommented
just saying, maybe it's time to find a new editor.
Some one told me that Mc thrashing the goons in the Yuri arc so ruthlessly was forced, let me ask you, what will you do when you are constantly betrayed and feel that your hardwork was for nothing and then when some one you care for gets extremely hurt, will you not get angry and made and wanna kill someone, if my explanation still isn't enough for those saying that the scene was forced,I have nothing to say, - Mistaken_Smile3mthCommented
I would fire that editor if I were you
Jack looked around himself trying to look for what hit him, suddenly he heard the sounds of footsteps and immediately cast a spell just in time to slow down a might bug eagle the size of a car from scooping him up into the air, Jack quickly dodged to the size, the next moment, the eagle broke out from Jacks spell, and rushed at him once again. - Mistaken_Smile3mthCommented
hey just saying I wouldn't want to pay an editor for this. you should fire them
I felt heavy as if I was bound by soemthing heavy, but that didn't matter anymore, nothing did, I am not worthy anymore. - Mistaken_Smile3mthCommented
yep this confirms that you should fire the editor
"It says that both parties aren't allowed to the timer with each other inventions for greedy purposes such as selling them or mass producing them unless given permission." asked Tony as he pointed at the Clause. - Mistaken_Smile3mthCommented
again fire your editor
Jack was a little surprised by Yuri, on the moment she was consoling His alter personality and the next moment she is hugging him and crying, Jack slowly latter her as she cried for a bit, not knowing what else to do, he just kept saying 'it's gonna be alright to her over and over again - Mistaken_Smile3mthCommented
man you gotta fire your editor
"Yeah! this place is owned by a former cop, dad always takes us here for the the the food" told Gwen as she passed the menu over to Peter. - Mistaken_Smile3mthCommented
if you are going to use the word either in a paragraph there needs to be an alternative. "either he was dreaming OR this was actually real"
The reason why the pictures could move means that either he was dreaming, but that wasn't possible since the whole of New York had such material.