jonkit

I thought he doesn't feel pain?

🤯 boom

damn Seamus is there too?

why not his super cool and fresh and new "invisible phantom charm" thingy?

I actually got whiplash from this

feels unnecessary to include the whole thing, feels bloated

sentence structure is kinda eh with the "word" -word-, and they're both spoken dialogue and not thoughts or something else

though I'm pretty sure this is like the 3rd attempt at publishing this novel

oh hey a new arcane fanfic!... oh no authors English sucks. Yeah... the writing quality is worse than a few translations I've seen on this platform. Also I find that the whole gamer thingy he's got going on is really cringe. What makes it worse is that half of the word count per chapter is just recap, I don't know whether it gets better. I've only read up to chapter 12 and cannot bear this anymore.