I think this is a great story. You describe the characters well and the story seems to be developing nicely. I am looking forward to reading more, keep up the good work!

Well that’s awkward 😅

Interesting so far

Oh ok thanks!

Whats a niggard???

Why doesn’t he remember Hazel but remembers everyone else

I agree thats strange

Oh no! He doesn’t remember Hazel 😔

Thank goodness he didn’t die

I said the same thing???

WOW that was sad ...

Its getting even more interesting

Yes she is very brave

Love this chapter

Maybe?

Im not sure either..

Wow

Please don’t marry Klara

Please dont marry her

I agree..