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Albrich5mthCommentedCh 266 Chapter 266- Albrich1yrReplied to AngelLily
I thought they are Vampires; why can they shift into dragons? Is there a story I should have read before?
"I see you went to visit that blind, useless brother of yours. What did you tell him?" He questioned her, and Leia, who was disgusted to the core, spat on him, causing Logan to quickly draw his head back. - Albrich1yrCommented
I don‘t know how many times it was already mixed up, but ‚bought‘ is paar tense of ‚to buy‘. The past tense of ‚to bring‘ is ‚brought‘.
It was said that a long time ago the demon race invaded the world. They had managed to take over the Dying Isle Continent along with 2 other continents that were near the Dying Isle continent. At that time, the entire world was said to have bathed in chaos. The invasion of a foreign race had bought all the races in this world together. - Albrich1yrCommentedCh 256 Chapter 256
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„Tires of friendship“? What does this mean?
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To be honest, I liked your previous Version better. It had a mysteriousness to it. And you could still use their past as an explanation, why Sylvan likes her. (For Example: You could have used, him finding a picture of them to make him remember) But it probably would have been harder to continue the story so the change is understandable. Either way your story is fantastic! I await your next chapter!
Ch 3 Signing Up For Madness? - Albrich2yrCommented
Already did it!!! Can‘t be sure yet (till now there are only 4 Chaptors), but I think it is going to be as amazing as this book!!! Keep up the good work ! I love it!
I am here with another request for you. Please can you guys read a new story called "We Don't Fall In Love". It's an urban love story and I will be super grateful if you guys could leave reviews and comments. It's really important that you give stars and reviews, so I hope that you do. - Albrich2yrCommentedCh 187 Ch. 186 Now and Forever (R-18)
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Is there a reason, that Luna never bites her opponents? Until now she only struck them.
After striking the Elite Red Scorpion with her paw, Luna moved away very quickly, avoiding the poisonous tail that came from behind the large monster. - Albrich2yrCommented
I think our auther got confused and actually meant millennium (a thousend years).
"Chris . . ." Colin called again after a moment and this time Chris looked up. "Snallygasters don't live that long. All the books I have read mentioned that a Snallygaster could live up to two hundred years and in exceptional cases two hundred and fifty years, nothing more than that." - Albrich2yrPosted
This is the first hp-fanfic I read and I need to say: It is very good! The author uses an reincarnated op character to change the storyline of the original but manages to maitain the old charakers. In this fanfic we follow this new op Mc as he tries to protect Harry Potter and battles Voldemort, as he is not as political (and because of ideals) constrained as Dumbeldore. The only advice I would give is this: If you(the author) would make your storyline even more detailed, you could sell this novel at the bookstore. People would pay for it.