Review Detail of Albrich in Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

This is the first hp-fanfic I read and I need to say: It is very good! The author uses an reincarnated op character to change the storyline of the original but manages to maitain the old charakers. In this fanfic we follow this new op Mc as he tries to protect Harry Potter and battles Voldemort, as he is not as political (and because of ideals) constrained as Dumbeldore. The only advice I would give is this: If you(the author) would make your storyline even more detailed, you could sell this novel at the bookstore. People would pay for it.