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I just wanted to give the idea since you included Wiz, I thought that since they are characters without power or defined history (they only have a marked personality in their comics), you could add both to them at your convenience (they are OC with a default demon body) pst: sorry for answering this so late, my wifi is acting strange and I was only able to send the OK before it failed again
Hello Author, could you add the Helltaker girls with a mission like: [scenario card:replacement] description: for unknown reasons the great helltaker was never born, you must replace the helltaker and conquer/dominate his fated harem Condition: conquer/dominate the fated harem of the (non-existent) Helltaker. reward (for throwing ideas): -halo helltaker: increased obedience and affection of biblical beings -supervitality: xxx% increase in physical capabilities -prophetic dreams: you can take a look at the future benefits that luck prepared for you postscript: I don't know if you will ignore this comment, so I will repeat this comment in the following chapters until you tell me that you won't include helltaker's girls
Good chapter
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(I had to do this review with google translate because I spoke Spanish or Castilian but I loved the story and I wanted to give it a review, sorry for the spelling mistakes) This story is interesting, beautiful and hot, it is also surprising how the author can introduce biological and chemical knowledge without making you dizzy, lost or bored, he manages to maintain a constant and fluid rhythm that does not stagnate or get ahead of problems. that the author presents, also obviously the potential of the character is great but at the same time it is not clear how far his individual strength can go (which I personally love and makes me wonder how far his individual strength can go, for me it is this story is can read a thousand times, I already read 3 times)