Nice start. Let's see where it goes.

Just keep writing your story. It's an enjoyable romp and you should just keep doing what your doing. It's your story and your not even asking for $.

Another good chapter.

Another enjoyable chapter. Thanks!

A fairly enjoyable romp of a story. A guy falls down and ends up on his families lands in Tarnow, Poland. From there he goes about trying to prevent the eventual collapse and fall of the Commonweath. Is it real somehow or all just a simulation that he isn't aware of he is involved in?