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Attempting to fix drastic grammar/word issues and add details that hopefully don't take away from the feel of the novel.

Uploaded first chapter, think its better but probably need to make the thoughts more natural later.

No problem man, gonna write two versions of the first chapter when I get power back. One with added detail and one with just fixed grammar and see which the readers want.

Liked the overall story, the various different cases, the small charcter development and pulling in different part of the cyberpunk world but the story gets distracting when there are writing errors or misspelled names/words. I would appreciate it if you would let me edit the story to fix those errors.