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Good novel, EXP
I don't know, I was unmotivated by the fact that I received a lot of criticism in my first novel, plus I had already written over 60 chapters so there was no way to make the changes that people had asked me to do.
Nice Story, EXP
don't give up on continuing this fic, it's very good despite the grammar mistakes, but i don't blame you i'm terrible in english too. 140 140
Thanks for the feedback, I intend to continue writing even if the world hates this novel, this is my first time writing something, so I don't intend to give up. I am sad that people drop my novel so soon, as in the future many things will happen. Well, on the reviews of angry people in this novel, I can't do much other than give my best.
Fixed, THX <3
Hello I am the author, I am giving this review to talk a little. English is not my primary language so don't expect something perfect, I am trying to improve over time and I hope to achieve it. The first few chapters can be a little difficult to read, as I still didn't have much idea of what to do, but I guarantee it will improve over time. I hope you give my novel a chance. All feedback is welcome so feel free.
I will be correcting this mistake in the future, I apologize.
there is the teles and tepes faction. Tepes is OC faction.