Damn Good So Fresh, Read 1 Chapter "hmm look like interisting" 4 Chapter ah i think this is good, idk later but i apreciate it so i write this, i hope this story not bored as much as chapter release.

Damn so cool, this is so fresh, 40 chapter and i give you 9.5 score, awesome, usually many story habe big potension and so awesome earlier, but bored as many chapter they write, i hope this story as cool as far now i read "40 chapter), and good luck

This is so sad, i have big hope for this story, but its your choice, i hope you lucky, and new story still have kingdom building element :)

All my daily stone just for you, please upload every day :)

more chapter a day please :(

So love your novel so far, i hope you can consistent 2 chapter a day, all my daily stone just for you

Damn Good, your story have potential, so fresh now make it be awesome, but it is depend on your imagination and your finger, early story more easy than latter, so good luck brother. i hope i am not drop your book latter but now its damn good

Your story about dragon so fresh, except MC skill, but you can make this story being awesome if you not to focus about MC skill, so far i love it, 5 star for your work, keep make the story so fresh, because many story as many chapter as they made, then it being boring about story, conflic and world building, sorry for my english, i just wanna give you advice and praise 😁. Keep it up

Cerita yang baik, memiliki potensi besar, dan yang paling penting itu pembangunan kerajaan, sangat berharap ceritamu akan menjadi luar biasa, yang harus di jaga adalah isi cerita setiap halaman, karna kebanyakan novel semakin banyak bab maka akan semakin membosankan, semoga berhasil dengan ceritamu kawan, aku mengawasi

Awesome to hear you finally write a story, because i'm like you and now i'm not yet write a story, because my English still bad for write, but for advice you must have learn more about writing and make the reader fall in love with that, skill MC, world building, and story sometimes good sometimes bored, and finally i drop it, sorry bro, but glad to see you start writing, keep it up bro good luck, you have good idea for a story

i enjoyed the story but when gun comming i'm out, idk why fantasy world must have gun, if this is story about scifi its ok, but sorry bro i cant continue.

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so freaking good, keep write bro. more chapter please.......................................................................................

Why must have gun?, i think this is medieval fantasy, please dont make this story so bored with gun, i think your story will be awesome without gun bro, good luck

Your story so fresh and unique, AS a fans of novel theme kingdom building and medieval world with fantasy, i hibe this story 9.5/10 if you guys Love medieval world or kingdom building, this story for you guys, please more chapter 🔥

Saya suka ceritanya, memiliki potensi yg besar untuk di kembangkan, saya hanya berharap cerita fantasi lebih baik tidak memasukan elemen teknologi seperti senapan, meriam dan lain lain, karena hal itu membuat cerita tidak menyenangkan. Lebih banyak hal menarik yang bisa di ceritakan di bandingkan dengan senjata moderen walaupun hal itu mengandung unsur magic bukan bubuk mesiu. Ini hanya opiniku

Review bahasa Indonesia: Sangat suka dengan karya mu sejauh ini, tapi biasanya kebanyakan novel sangat indah di awal dan hambar saat semakin jauh, saya harap karyamu akan tetap indah sampai selesai, good luck Dan semoga semakin banyak pembaharuan setiap hari 🔥🍻

Damn, The story for This novel so fresh and i hope genre kingdom building Will add in this novel, outhor give US 10 chapter a day pleaseeeee

I hope you can make this novel with (kingdom building) hastag and i hope the story like that, btw this story so good, i'm fans of kingdom building story

Finaly, kingdom building novel with fresh story and world concept, i hope this is will be amaizing just like now "early story", and not bored in the midle story like usualy wn ill give stone avery day so please make 2 chapter every day :)