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I like Overlord it is a really good light novel series.

2020-09-25 JoinedUnited States
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  • PowerGamer41
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    Commented

    He

    Hawrin started to laugh as he agreed. "No matter how talented he may have been, I will still achieve more than him in this life!"
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    Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • PowerGamer41
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    Never seen this death before

    "Oh I KNOW I died.. I drank like 3 Monsters to stay up for a project and faceplanted my keyboard. As long as I don't have to bust my ass for twenty hours straight again, I'm cool." The ghost man shuddered at the mention of 'twenty hours'.
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    RWBY Omniversal Chatroom System
    Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer4110mth
    Commented

    This sounds Villainous

    Looking down, he saw the petite frame of one of his favorite girls in the show, Neopolitan. Or Neo, for short. The girl looked up at him and squinted as if she were inspecting the boy. He almost wanted to abduct her right there and then. She seemed way more developed than she had in the early volumes. He knew she was an antagonist but capturing and converting her for his harem shouldn't be too hard, right? He just needed to show her he understood her. Clearing his throat he looked down at her sincerely and spoke.
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    RWBY Omniversal Chatroom System
    Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer4110mth
    Commented

    It better not be Jupiter hopefully.

    <You have purchased the transmigration ticket to a random planet.>
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    Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World
    Fantasy · DamnPlotArmor
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer4110mth
    Commented

    Most likely to keep people from reasearching the them further

    "They were using Undead? But why did the Holy Church of Light hide that information from everyone? Why is there nothing about this in the history books?"
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    Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer4110mth
    Commented

    Good story so far

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Selected by the Gods
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    Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer4110mth
    Commented

    So is the flame like a clear like gray color or is it like a white clear color?

    At the surface of the platform, a fist-sized flame that had no color just like water was floating and flickering gently above it. While underneath it, two corpses were lying unmoving.
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented
    But, as he twisted the valve, Peter put a bit too much power into it and the knob broke off like it was made of styrofoam or cardboard.
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented

    Well that's new I have not read a story where it takes place in Turkey before.

    For several days, Turkey had been under attack by monsters, skeletons, and similar inhuman beings led by The Roots, who have come from outside of the world and infiltrated humanity.
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    Order Killer
    Action · KaGen
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented

    Good first chapter and good hook the reason the hook was good was that you ended the chapter with a question.

    Ch 1 The 2nd Player
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    Soul Beast Online
    Games · Monachre
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
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    Sir I think that when before posting a chapter you should proof read the chapter first to make sure it flows better also it appears that you are posting short chapters just remember you writing speed will increase the more you write so don't give up. Also look up the a video called Will power is for losers and down load the cold Turkey Blocker along with getting someone that would help yo get off of stuff to help you write more. Also when outlining your story use the words therefor and but look up how to write a pilot episode by Studio binder that should help you plot your story better ok bye hope you write well.

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    Twelve-12
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented

    So this world has the same calendar as his own original world

    Actually, to be truthful he chose a certain date to be his new birthday and that was the same day he had died in his old life. Makes things easier to remember and keep track of.
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    ARCANE - LOL: Alchemist Prelude
    Video Games · MiracleWorm
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented

    Just so you know you can download the cold turkey blocker that can help you right more. look for the video how to build success with out willpower or discipline video. Also having someone tell you to get of stuff can also help. Also dopamine detoxing might help as well have a good luck writing.

    Ch 1 The Port City of Tunus
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    2nd Chance!
    Games · ctthaauthor
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented
    [Remaining Balance: ¥69,569,900.00]
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    Imagine Breaker in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Geraint124x
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented

    and mother

    "Shut up! You bitch! Why is that child hair different? I knew it you're hiding something from me!"
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    Imagine Breaker in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Geraint124x
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented

    I feel so bad for the father

    "Shut up! You bitch! Why is that child hair different? I knew it you're hiding something from me!"
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    Imagine Breaker in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Geraint124x
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented

    Well this person seems pretty nice

    "You have such amazing achievements, a featherweight contender with a record 19 Wins No Lose No Draw, most of your victories are way of knock out and others are submission."
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    Imagine Breaker in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Geraint124x
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented
    Looking down and near my headlights I could see a vague transparent screen showing me a bank balance of my $10mill and a month countdown. Moving closer to the payment machine my headlight blipped and the transaction went through.
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    A TRANSFORMER IN CARS
    Movies · KingdomReads
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented
    Luigi: "No Luigi saw it too"
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    A TRANSFORMER IN CARS
    Movies · KingdomReads
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  • PowerGamer41
    PowerGamer411yr
    Commented
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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    A TRANSFORMER IN CARS
    Movies · KingdomReads
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