Review Detail of PowerGamer41 in Twelve-12

Sir I think that when before posting a chapter you should proof read the chapter first to make sure it flows better also it appears that you are posting short chapters just remember you writing speed will increase the more you write so don't give up. Also look up the a video called Will power is for losers and down load the cold Turkey Blocker along with getting someone that would help yo get off of stuff to help you write more. Also when outlining your story use the words therefor and but look up how to write a pilot episode by Studio binder that should help you plot your story better ok bye hope you write well.