Doom hardly missed the chance to become stronger and more versatile! he could teleport to the station while exposed to radiation, thereby hiding his new abilities. also had to create an energy harvester, which turned the fantastic four into supers! if he misses such opportunities, then he is not as smart as the Author wants to show him!

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where are the real scouts?! Did the entire squad foolishly walk into a potential trap? or even just the clones were not sent for testing. not even an ordinary genin... what nonsense!

hmm... of course, it’s easier to blame everything on talent! They say that Luffy is a real talent and no one can compete with him! I don't care if Zoro has mastered Sanji Haki. and later Royal Haki (in the Onigashima arc)! not to mention Usopp, who awakened Observation Haki in the Dres Rosa arc. Yes, even supposedly Nami awakened the Royal Will after the Onigashima arc.

Well, yes... the author is not looking for easy ways, and decided to delay with Haki, because if he worked the same way as Luffy, he would very quickly master all Haki! but with strong Haki, the author would have completely failed to cope with the character! so you need to tighten and pull the cat by the balls. And Nerf the ggs as much as possible! He probably didn't even use Royal Haki 100%. Eh... but it was a good start! Unfortunately, the author does not want to make true progress too quickly!

that is, this fanfic is a pure copying of the canon only on behalf of the fanfiction? hmm... almost an exact copy! I'm disappointed!

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if you can, please separate Ki and Haki, and refine them! but it’s kind of so-so to be honest. Not fish or fowl! also don't take away Usopp's rocket and his tricks! No matter how much endurance he has, constant ki charges will quickly exhaust him! it would be cool if the deceased could put ki like Haki into warheads and increase the damage from them (this way he would have enough energy for protracted battles). There is also an idea, at your discretion, to somehow spread Ki to the world of One Piece, and make everyone stronger, and perhaps reach the Cosmic level of power. also think about the possibility of giving some kind of DF (fruit). Give him a worthy opponent, because it will help a lot and will be much more interesting!

Rokushiki and the moments of the Straw Hats battle with CP9 at Enies Lobby and their variety to help!

YES... Let's nerf it a little!?

THE AUTHOR MAKES THEM RESIST SO SO MUCH THAT IT'S SIMPLY HORROR! THIS IS AS WRONG AS POSSIBLE! I'M CRINGING!

Toriko, One Piece, Naruto, Dc, Bleach, Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann, JoJo's, Hanter x Hanter, WoW

3 heads 6 arms

why wouldn't he merge all the techniques into one in order to improve one technique in every way? try to do it like Qin Mu from the Tale of the Fast of the Gods

he can become the king of the beasts from the world of Toriko! these are imb creatures capable of destroying the planet Marvel with one blow! since it is not reinforced with gourmet cells, like the same planet Toriko

I wonder when he will already say that he is a migrant?! because he is still that talker! while I noticed only chatter from gg that he doesn’t even notice any EMOTIONS FROM MY SISTER, WHAT I HAVE NOT SEEN HIM FOR 3 YEARS!!! Does this idiot don't care? I understand those people who stopped reading... this!