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Cliffhanger? Seriously? That's such a cheap trick.

Is it really impossible to do without terms like shitjutsu and kido-ass-ido? I'm not a fan of Bleach and don't understand much about these words.

What's the dumbest thing you can do with a high-tech space fortress? Landing it on a planet, of course. That's like using a sniper rifle as a club.

Is it possible to do without no-name characters? Mac saved the boy? Well done, then you can give him a kick in the ass at the nearest settlement and do something more useful. If you really want to introduce a new character, then it would be better if it was a hot babe, not a shit-covered boy.

Only a child chooses, a man takes everything.

Seriously? He wasn't smart enough to take a rock or a piece of rebar and just smash the cabinet? Even a monkey could do that. Imbecile.

Too much anime vibes. The story is good but the constant anime girl tropes ruin it. If you're going to have a lot of hot girls in a story, make it a harem. No lesbians, they all have to die.

I think Maggie is a good match for MC. She is a beautiful and very loyal woman. And MC is strong and will definitely not let his head get smashed in front of his pregnant woman.

In 4 years he only got to level 13? Fucking loser.

Well, the beginning was tolerable. Choppy dialogue and word overload, a clear sign of AI. And even despite this, it's readable. But once the author introduced invasions from other dimensions, as well as reincarnators in place of his newborn children, everything became shit. I would rather read the story of Fallout than epileptic twitches in anime style.