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He got a finger in his ass. Lol, what a loser.

This author has a rare talent. He is able to turn even the most popular fictional universe into something ordinary and dull. In this story, whether there is a main character or not, it does not matter, he does not affect anything in general, he strictly follows the original outline of the story.

I hope the story will be without homosexuality. He didn't even talk to Jaina as warmly as he does to Varian. Too saccharine. Too sappy. Too sappy. Turn down the sweet talk and eliminate it as much as possible in the dialogues between the guys. Such rosy dialogues just make me shrivel up.

I don't understand how this fanfic got such a high rating. The main character is a masochist. He is insulted, humiliated and mocked, and he does nothing in response. His wife, a psychopath, carries him around in her arms like a girl and dominates him in every way. It's so disgusting.

If you're interested in reading about a psychopath who kills people without reason in the first few chapters, this is the story for you. I'll probably skip it. It's too dirty, in my opinion.

Constant internal dialogues ruin everything. .............................................................................................................................

Because the prototype for the MC was a Finnish sniper, killer and fascist cocksucker, I give it the lowest rating. Showing scum like this as heroes is a very bad idea. Well, to put it simply, MC is a little cowardly, faggot chicken. Dumb and narrow-minded.

Another jerk from the Patreon site. Honestly, this is disrespectful to the reader and just disgusting behavior. P.S.: I won’t be too lazy to duplicate my review in the hope that such a bastard will delete his account.

Another jerk from the Patreon site. Honestly, this is disrespectful to the reader and just disgusting behavior. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Mr. Freeman.