I like almost everything about this novel. The world is in itself nothing new but i find the interpersonal relationships unique in the sense that the MC is submissive and it isnt a onesided harem. Especially the smut chapters are well written. They are atleast more entertaining than similar novels i read. And i have nothing to complain about the writing quality. Now we come to the negative point of this novel and this is my personal but i really can't stand an MC that hides his identity or his power level. That just doesnt sit well with me and is the reason i decided to drop many similar novels with such an MC which is a shame because i really liked this novel. For others who have not a problem with such an MC. You will love this novel.

Chapter 102:Everything better...nearly no faults...impressive...

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Thank you webnovel for ruining my paragraph spacing.

Review at Chapter 74:This is a review for me and my fellow readers who may or may not like the same novels like me.First of all I have no Problem with the Update Stability, the World Background or the Story Development.I find them splendid and hope the future chapters will as entertaining or even better.The only thing i do not like is the MC.Specifically his actions towards danger.He is indeed weak and maybe naive.But thats not the issue.The issue is that despite being weak he seems to always run towards dangers that are far too much for him.For example:1. The academy gets attacked by eleves severel levels over the MC.He is traumatised and frozen in shock but while his friend helps him run away he goes back?To do what? He is weak and would have to be protected which doesnt help at all but in the end he survives.2. I know that he wants revenge but against people who can kill a whole noble estate you need to be careful.Instead he runs into their hideout and loses and survives again.I call that plot!These two circumstances show what is frustrating in this novel.You can write a weak to strong novel with a naive boy.But atleast give him some positive aspects.Like a little bit smarter so he doesnt need to be saved by plot. Brandon Chen is a Mangaka who makes Youtube and he also loves the weak to strong genre and he explains that this genre is very frustrating for readers at the beginning so you need to give the MC a few positive traits so readers dont leave at the beginning. Let him first accumulate Strenght first to reach his goals.For example at my first point: Instead of running back let him run away and let that be his motivation for growing stronger.You can show some positive by letting him be hardworking and showing that he doesnt like his weak self. In your novel it is nearly the same (It is not really fleshed out) but the running back part shows that he doesnt think about his actions.The focus is not on how hardworking he is despite only having B talent since he used a potion to get to rank 2 and i wish there put be a stronger indication that his motivation to get stronger is to avenge his dad.So what i wanted to say is that even if you write an unlikable character at the beginning that changes throughout the story he needs to have at least 1 positive aspect in his character so that people can still relate to him and wanting to read his journey till he changes.Nonetheless is this a Novel i continue to read because i see its potential and everything else is just beautiful.And that means something because i dont like weak to strong novels and i am ectremly picky with what i read.So all in all i think this is something positive.PS1: Some grammar errors every couple of chapters.Sometimes he forgets the difinite article.Especially with the word "the".PS2: If you have other opinions let me know what you think about my "rant" and discuss it in a civilized manner.PS3: What country are you from? Is English your first or second language? I find it fascinating to find no spelling errors but sometimes there is no difinite article.(I am not an English expert myself)As my last words i want to thank you because even if the novel may or may not be to my liking i find it impressive what you have created.And someday i wish to write my own novel so i hope you dont take my comment as something negative but as something that may or may not help you understand your readers minds and grow as an author.

Writing Quality 5 Stars?I am currently at chapter 74 and my english is also not very good but i feel like there is atleast 1-2 mistakes per chapter.Words are not writen wrong but he sometimes forgets to put "the" before a word and thats a little annoying but i am somewhat of a perfectionist (as in i try my best to not make any mistakes but they happen nonetheless) in such matters so maybe it is easier for to find and bothers me more than other people.

The ML is a fucking creep. After they slept for the first time he chases her out of the house but the next morning he is adament that she is his girlfriend. He doesnt let her do anything alone and forces himself upon (with kisses and such). He doesnt let her any choice. She is literally forced into this relationship!

I love her❤

I think she is dead

Alchemy apprentice

Gladiator

Since she's Anna's friend, i don't want them to have issues. Anna teaches Victor how to behave later.

How can he ascend to the fourth dimension? Fourth dimension is to purify the body but is it an automatic process that comes after some time or does he need to do it manually. If his body and mind are on the fourth dimension, can he be considered a fourth dimensional being?

What is he doing in Superhuman?

New friends and enemies acquired.

Glad he is using his head now. Was not really a fan of his reactions since he joined Valiant Mountain.

Is it the first time he got so ruthless? Not that im complaining tho. HYPE!

Many new members for Umbra in the Supernatural and bloodline world. Cant wait to see them facing Draco and Eva. What will be their reaction?