Muito boa esta fanfic. Uma abordagem leve e divertida. É uma história que eu ainda não consigo ver o final, já que não dá pra prever o que o personagem pode fazer. Afinal ele vai deixar Kaguya sair do selo ou não?! Obrigado por escrever.

Não sei se você vai ler meu comentário. Mas gostaria de agradecer por escrever. É sempre divertido acompanhar os capítulos e entender o rumo dos acontecimentos.

Fico pensando se este ser não seja o Juubi? E que Kaguya na verdade mantinha poder sobre ele, para a própria segurança do mundo.

Não sei se gosto dessa história de uma Sakura do futuro. Pois se fosse realmente do futuro ela não existiria. Para mim ela é uma Sakura de um mundo paralelo. E Kaguya a enviou como mandou Sasuke embora. A diferença é que ela mandou Sasuke inteiro e a Sakura o Espírito. Me incomoda do MC trabalhar para devolver o corpo, já que claramente, ele é a "Sakura" deste mundo. E a outra é uma invasora.

Kkkkkkkkkk Os Uchihas estão parecendo mais um grupo de Gangsters kkkkk

Obrigado por escrever. Gosto de fanfics que exploram o passado. Espero ter ótimas experiências lendo a história. Um abraço

Kkkkkkkkk Meio sem pé e sem cabeça. Mas legal.

Kkkkkk Legal o Gran Torino. Gostei muito do Shiori estudando táticas de namoro. Foi engraçado. Espero que a Ibara se recupere logo tbm. Obrigado por escrever. Espero que no final, Naruto encontre uma casa para onde poder retornar.

Maybe in this story Jiraya helped the trio earlier, but it doesn't make much sense for the Protagonist to know that since he's basing his knowledge of his world on Naruto's story. In the original Jiraya is only in the rain village to fight in the war, with Iwa already in the conflict. Then he sympathizes with the children and stays to teach them. But at the time of the fic Iwa hasn't entered the war yet, so it doesn't make sense for the kids to know Jiraya and like I said, if Jiraya helped the kids before what is described in Naruto, it doesn't make sense for the Protagonist to know that. But I thank you for writing

I didn't really understand what magical babies are. But I believe that the more the better. I hope Alan teaches the septan the words of God. I think it was, grow and multiply. And with so many deaths in the war, more babies to populate the world, it's just another part of the job for him. Alan can take advantage of the Septa, to conquer it and maybe in the future start with a foundation for his own religion. "Alanzoatrism". Present in all instances of history. hahahaha

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aaahhh Surprise me. hahahahaha I'll just wait.

I reread the chapter on the intriguing couple. But I confess that I didn't identify the man. I don't remember any character with that description in the eye. But then I turned to the "college students", if you understand the kkkkk reference and I saw that someone in the comments was talking about Bolton and Barbrey's sister. It makes sense. But I don't think it's Rawsay, it makes more sense to be Rose himself.

It's strong for you to refute me like that author-san kkkkkk. But now I really don't know who the criminals would be. I don't think it's from Dorne, as they owe Mc. I could have guessed it would be Arianne Martell, but I think at the moment she would be too young and in the last chapter she seemed well-intentioned by the protagonist. As far as I remember, nothing was presented in the fic that shows who did it and that's very frustrating, I like to assemble the puzzle and come up with theories. Well, the villains could be Barbrey's family too, someone jealous of her and what she's achieved. The evildoers may think that if Barbrey dies, their son will stay with them and then they will have power over Dustin's house.

The target was Barbrey. I remember about 4 chapters ago a couple was conspiring against her. saying they couldn't let her destroy their plans. So which poison-handling couple could have done this? Lisa / Littlefinger, Cersei / Jaime. Or from Dorne... I think it's Lisa and Littlefinger. A strong north is not what Littlefin wants, mainly because the MC is Sansa's fiance. Which makes Dustin an ally of the Starks. And we all know Littlefinger wants the Starks to get screwed so he can appear on a white horse and "save" Catelyn.

Is it already a harbinger of another child? And I think he's better at taking care of Lisa and maintaining influence over her than Littlefinger. Lord Arryn should even thank Alan for that. thanks for the chapter

He needs to save Elia and the children. thanks for the chapter

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