Hayden_Warburton
Vivid reader and aspiring author. I haven't started my own novel yet as I wish to read more and experience other people's imaginative minds.
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Hayden_Warburton2dCommentedif I was in the mcs shoes, I'm telling you now this world would be skipped. deep dark sea with alien fish... nahhh I'm good thanks.
As the city that held the name of the entire world, it was the grandiose location that was the center of control for this world. Getting there though, was a headache for many. This was because the deeper you went under the sea, you would be faced with powerful deep-sea creatures that swarmed and killed Atlanteans and Merfolk for lunch.- Hayden_Warburton8dCommented
cia lost her parents, then taken in by pure and brainwashed. Then found her first freind only to see her distancing her self. then she looses all her memories. then she had them returned but also looses her recent memories as a consequence. not to mention the burden of seeing the future and helping the villian in her eyes who possibly took what little she had. I'm not saying her actions are right but I am saying that she is a charachter to be pitied as her life has been one massive unfortunate rollercoaster. honestly, putting your self in her shoes, I'm not sure how I would act because that would be enough to break an average individual.
'Please, continue to live on Layla⌠thank you, for having been my best friend.' - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommentedCh 22 Time to leave
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The ghoul from the woods that disappeared in the earth.
The creature moved in a straight line, quickly reducing the distance that separated them from the humans. - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
it's been proven that meat isnt the best source for that as your body will lack endurance. veg is apparently the way to go
"Do like I did when I was at the academy. Train until your muscles hurt, eat meat, use light magic to assimilate the food and rebuild your tissues. Rinse and repeat until you are too tired to continue." - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
little similar to his own shadow in appearance but yellow eyes
The black creatures were back, but this time their numbers were beyond calculation. Thanks to his heightened sense, Lith could see that they were not the same as the last time. They had a lipless mouth, filled with multiple rows of fang-like teeth and a single red eye shining in the middle of the forehead. - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
so far all the teachers have had a bit spoken about them and its interacted with them a bit more but she has hardly had anything said about her so far.
- "If only I was ten years older."â He sighed, relinquishing once and for all his romantic dreams about her. - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
so his offer is to cull humans?
He had grown sick of mankind's madness; a culling was needed. Unbeknownst to him, the world had heeded his call and was considering the offer. - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
I think some people forget that during his younger years he hunted alot of bounties and with out a doubt he killed them all in different ways as an "experiment". That plus him being like 6-8 years old is already enough evidence for the headmaster to think the way he does.
If he does his job and doesn't go on a murder spree, then he is fine by me." - Hayden_Warburton1yrReplied to Hille_Yum
hey I'm 11, I told my mom what you wrote and she said stay away cause people like you are possible paedophiles
'I can only hope that when they grow up, my sons will be able to mend their relationship. I can't force them to get along.' Raaz thought. - Hayden_Warburton1yrPosted
0-200 pages is an extremely good read. The system idea is a popular one and the author uses it extremely well. The MC development is shown to all as he goes from a innocent child with power who is completely new to the prospect of living for real to his thoughts that lack any negative emotions to eventually develop to a point of his own understanding of family and camaraderie. Also it's nice to read something where the main MC is overpowered as cultivation novels can get a little... Frustrating non the less as he or she is always running away with their tail tucked between their legs or laying low which eventually gets boring and I lose interest as they all sing the same tune. Now for the bad parts. Unfortunately at act three I believe is when everything becomes hard to keep me as reader fixated with the novel as I found my self skipping a lot of pages. The MC no longer feels like the centre of the story any more as it focuses on his summons to much and fills us with to much information about them that i find non consequential. Also it goes on for to long. Then after all that the MC is beaten and weekend which is got the final nail in the coffin for my attention span for this novel. Started great and then completely spirals out of my( as a readers ) line of attention. That's why to story development for me felt backwards completely. I didn't read to the end unfortunately so maybe he becomes more powerful and gets revenge but isn't that a bit to obvious, as soon as that thought cropped up I lost all interest as I could already imagine how the story was gonna progress. The Author has a lot of potential and I'll still attempt to read future novels. However please consider what your readers want as it's their attention you want to to captivate unless your writing just for your own satisfaction then fine I guess.
- Hayden_Warburton1yrCommentedCh 340 Strange Memories
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I completely agree if this book was few thousand pages long I could do with it but it its not so I know I'm reading something that's no longer interesting. you put overpowered in the tags. FALSE advertisement! I really wanted to read something different where the MC isnt running around with his tails between his legs. I thought this book would deliver but please come on arghhh
However, he felt as if something within him was missing, a major organ which he used to channel his powers⌠his Chaotic Jewel⌠- Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
do you regret not consuming your opponents now. Author your main MC is acting pathetic by simply forgetting, it's way to obvious
Silver was too weakened to care anyways, but this person in front of him could very much turn around the entire battle. - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
Don't judge me I know how to count! 1..3..4..6! seeeeeee.
[You have acquired the [Black Magical Jewel Orb of the Forbidden One], [Black Exoskeleton of the Forbidden One], [Left Black Pincer of the Forbidden One], [Right Black Pincer of the Forbidden One], [Black Deadly Jaws of the Forbidden One] and [Deadly Venomous Stinger of the Forbidden One]!] - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
Evolution : *Pandora Box* (New)
[Treasure Chest Mimic (Mythical)] - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommentedCh 857 Under Starlight's Flag
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Fuck me I feel like something is becoming so obvious here. Marlene dies. The other Christie takes over and use that legendary scroll mijigy to revive her...
Rhode puckered his brows. Of course, he knew who Christie was talking about. But now⌠She actually wanted Christie to head into the Land of Chaos? Rhode shifted his gaze between Marlene and Christie. - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
Anyone from London reading this đ
Lauren couldn't help but fume. Her Royal Highness Lydia had shown discontentment toward the Mercenary Association in terms of managing the disturbances caused by the group of bastards and now, this idiot caused another trouble for him. Damn it, he really thinks that I don't dare to touch him simply because he has the backing of a bunch of cock-sucking southerners? - Hayden_Warburton1yrCommented
is it possible that Rhodes is the Heir of the Void Dragon?
Under the shine of the magical radiance, the drafted Limitless Void Astrology and shining spots of stars in the dome linked up and formed a soaring huge dragon with its wings spread open. It lifted its head high and overlooked from above.