Only the weak get brain freeze.

Well, he can change to a full human form. That just hasn't been shown yet and you're just jumping the gun. Once again, you're back at it being an idiot.

What 'kid from our world'? He was a veteran Marine who'd been medically discharged after having his leg blown off. Learn how to read you idiot. Some people lmao.

Jason Todd isn't a kid though. Jason Todd after being trained by the All-Caste, Ducra and then joining the League of Assassins to be trained by Lady Shiva and Bronze Tiger, would be in his mid-twenties. Get your facts straight you cretin. Plus, he (the MC) is from Earth. He's the same age as he was on Earth, just in the MCU.

Dragons are overdone, honestly. I wanna make him more like a dinosaur on steroids and enhanced even further than that. Because Dinosaurs weren't wiped out due to running out of evolutionary paths or becoming defunct as a whole species. Not anything like that. It took a meteor to take the suckers out after all. Imagine how far they could've gone if they weren't wiped out? That's what I want the MC to be. The culmination of millions of years of evolution. The T-Rex was one of the biggest land carnivores to ever exist. Strongest bite force as well. Imagine what it'd be able to do if it had a few more tens of millions years time to evolve? Pretty scary stuff.

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Why...why do so many people think this is how you get a cold??? You don't get a cold through being literally cold. You get it through, like, actually having an illness. You can eat as much ice cream as you want! The worst thing that'll happen is you getting fat or other things related to eating too much sugar! You will not, however, get a cold.

No, I'm just trying to figure out what I want to write. Whether I want to write this one or my DC one. Depends entirely on the reaction I get from people and whether they like this one more or not. But depending on which one gets the most attention and which one I enjoy writing the most, determines which one I'll continue to write, yeah.

He's gonna go learn Chi before that. Fits more with his fighting style than Magic/Sorcery does.

I just don't know if that'd be a good fit though. MC is in his early thirties. Wanda is at most in her early twenties. Maybe even younger. So, it's a massive age gap. Plus, there'd be no way to have them know one another before Wanda gets the hots for Vision.

Decent story. Grammar could use a lot of work, however. MC is just a bit too edgy for my tastes as well and has the typical tragic background to add a smidgen of depth to his character but even that isn't written very well. Bit of personal bias here but--Speed isn't the only asset to be used by a swordsman. They value strength in their swings just as much as they value the speed of the swing. With a class like 'Sword Saint' I expected the MC to be the ultimate swordsman with both amazing speed and incredible strength but no. It's just the same old recipe: speedy swordsman who uses his speed and ''skill'' to take out his opponents before they can react. There's nothing fun about that. Whatever. Good luck with continuing the story, I guess.

So the Sword Saint's a pussy who dodges every attack? Lmao. A Sword Saint should have equal amounts of strength and speed, and he most definitely wouldn't just focus on speed. Having too much of one and lacking in the other is a massive weakness. Focusing in speed means you lack destructive power and ability to overpower opponents or even clash with opponents - you'd just end up dodging all the time. If that's the case, then what's the difference between a Sword Saint and an Assassin or any other speed-based class? Focusing strength means you'd lack the ability to hit faster opponents and would just be there to get hit. So, uh, I'm dropping. Just like always, there's a sword MC made by an author who doesn't realize that speed and strength are just as valuable as the other one. Being a speedy swordsman is overdone to high hell. Same with the brute swordsman. I want a swordsman who has both brilliant speed and herculean strength. But alas, looks like I'm not getting it with this pussy MC who just bases everything in combat off of speed lol.

I'm undecided on the final pairing but the MC will have a few relationships before he ends up with someone he decides to stay with. Like marriage or whatever.

Yeah.

Seriously. I'd have skipped school so easily back in the day if you could get a cold this way lmao.

No, fanfics are there for you to have your take on a piece of literature or a movie. Not to twist the source material into some novel where the MC goes around collecting girls for his harem and pretty much solely thinks with his dick. Plus, there's good wish fulfillment and there's bad wish fulfillment. This is the latter. Everything is forced and feels half-assed. Lazy, even.

Not actually possible for him to have an ''average''-looking body after being in the army. Military doesn't automatically mean jacked and muscular but after a certain time of service (really, straight after basic training) a soldier will have a lean and athletic body. So, far from average-looking, honestly. This is further made impossible when he's literally an enforcer for the Yakuza. He'd have to have a certain level of fitness to work for them as an enforcer and that'd mean his body would be far from average. Honestly, I hate it when authors do this. They make a so-called badass MC but give him the physique of some average joe. Smh.

No, he's an ***** in a teenagers body. Don't try and stick up for the pedophile that is the MC of this book. He's a twenty-something year old man who's seducing and having ***/committing sexual acts with minors. His mentality has nothing to do with it. He's an *****. He shouldn't be going anywhere near minors for stuff like ***.

And your point is? Sure, he grew up with Lana but did he spend any meaningful time with her? You can know someone for years and yet be closer with someone you've known for months. So the fact he grew up with her doesn't mean she should hold any unconditional love for Clark or anything lmao. Also, the only reason he visits the girls and goes out of his way to meet them is because he wants to get his dick wet. Nothing other than lust and his dick thinking when it comes to women lol. Plus, Clark hasn't done anything THAT great. He's good looking. That's pretty much his best thing. Other than that, he's an asshole. A genuinely unpleasant person. Manipulative. A liar. When you look at him on a grander scale, he's literally just Homelander minus the rape and homicidal tendencies. But the manipulative, superficial bastard part? He's got that down to a T.

Yeah, I know, I was just joking about. Magic can be used in a bunch of funky ways in DC. He's gonna use magic for body enhancement as well. That's what I meant when I said Punch Magic. Practically just fill his fist with magic and let a punch loose. Would do a lot of damage to someone like Supes.