Arkmiss

kk got it thanks for the feedback

Yeah ty I am trying to make a plot for that one and I want to take it slower then this fanfic.I added too much stuff in this too where I even gotten confused .

ty you for showing me.Dont know why I missed that .

No well technically aura is in on it but really she is just there.I don't plan on adding anyone else .

Thank you unfortunately telling me

Can you perhaps tell me where

Thank you for telling me I will try to make it clearer

No I decided to make the previous a prototype .

I'm Really new to writing so that would be a big help help to me currently

If you can please tell me what you disliked so I can improve .How did it go haywire