i agree with everything bigfatsoya wrote, typical cliches, mc is acting worst then 17 year old, not to say 27 with dark past, and really dumb

and yeah mc actual age is 27 and emotional age might be even far above that, imagine experiencing some kills ur father and ur mother dies of grif, and later on strugling thru for years alone,...

yeah, and typical mc gets against some gang in early stages and gets himself and his family in danger, worst of all like martial disciple goes in deserted pub to make trouble yeah right... and autor said its not easy and u need talent and lots of work to go on path of material arts and now he makes character like this material disciple... i already know i cant anticipate much from this novel

its same like all sign in novel that I saw about cultivation, that mage, they say they won't bother with anything then they end up doing everything possible to keep their country stable even let their rank(power) leak and guiding king's children, faking pathetic

Develop? Man thats reincarnation mostly about that someone with mature starts life over again, with mature emotional understanding, knows how world work, someone that got taste of life even if just little bit, just can mostly reinforce someone's character mostly at least little bit change it but not develop it like a little child... idk how to expres myself :S

I hope mc learned something from this.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

alright thats it from me, well i wont complain, since it was free,. why i wont read more, its because i just want 1 main character in story, what u did with this girl is simply too much.

This guy is simp for a life, and in other life... smh disappointed, men there are soo many Chinese harem, romance novels, and here this guy comes to world where you can call elements with ur thoughts, and mc after all this trouble is soo close to have this, he goes against 1 of "core" elders... does he plan simply use this young elder that helped him as a shild or what? nice way to repay gratitude...

Idk who even rate novel like this? Bots made by autor or payed for leaving good rateing?

what are u smokin bro?

out!!! Get out of here!

why dose't he just go and find some advenced knight as guard? he has endless potential for growth and this point he should already be at level where he is popular in whole region, he should be able to find someone...MC is little bit dense...

right.... autor could at least just make him brake ties with her for ever and thats it if he doesn't want revenge.... but not team up....

ur right it was truly foolish from him to do something like that, after mission he prob gonna get new very strong enemy.... ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ smh whats worst he puts himself in this situation of price 3 barels of his wine... ffs

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I like it! :)