Mr_Zet

Well, it's worse than a harem.

This chapter turned out to be stupid. The main character was attacked for no reason, he just left quietly, and then decided to save them. The author, if we start from this chapter, then MC endured without a sense of her own dignity.

If he had been doing this for a whole year - yes, it would have been impressive. But he tightened his control and started using such things at the very beginning. What did he spend this year on? The author, you yourself set such a pace, and now you have sharply reduced it, and quite unreasonably. It's really disappointing.

At the moment, the mc actions look meaningless to me. For a whole year he did nothing, just to keep his balance, which is completely unjustified. There will be no balance anyway, since he is stronger than the enemies. Why did he create a new path of improvement? So far, I don't see any special advantages in this. It looks like a nerf. In general, you could just skip these chapters and forget about them, since there was no point in skipping time at all. Too stupid and unjustified. I'm really disappointed. I hope there won't be such nonsense in the future.

Why are there so many exclamation marks? Even in the narrative. The story is interesting, but the abundance of exclamation marks hurts the eye.

I like the writing style. I don't like too passive MC. But this is just the beginning, let's see what happens next.

I don't like where this is going. Hiding the power, nerf and it's all in Harry Potter... Disappointing.

Good.

It's getting boring. It was already boring, but after your "triumph" it became terrible. The previous arches were much better.

I like this story, but mc is defective.