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Enma_Eden

Enma_Eden

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Enma🥰

2020-09-10 JoinedNigeria
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2yr
    Posted

    This is nice. Although, the writing needs a little work and some editing here and there. Other than that, this book is great. The synopsis introduced the characters well and the first chapter is perfect. Nice work author san

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    Urban · Unicorn_Kaki
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2yr
    Commented

    First great chapter hun

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Urban · Unicorn_Kaki
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2yr
    Commented

    Drunk, yet manipulative AF

    " Please? You really want to leave a young woman, who by the way is really drunk alone with a man who could secretly be a kidnapper. " I tilted my head to the side to add to my dramatic act.
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    Urban · Unicorn_Kaki
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2yr
    Commented

    My mind immediately went to Dr. Strange😂

    "Thank you very much, Mr. Strange."
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    Lorraines Bullet
    Urban · Unicorn_Kaki
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2yr
    Commented

    lolll

    "My Sister, hiccup, said I shouldn't go with strange men, and you Mister are very very strange. But I trust you, so bring, hiccup, taxi, hiccup, me."
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    Urban · Unicorn_Kaki
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2yr
    Posted

    Hey minna san! This is a shameless review lol. Anyways, this book is edited by me, so I apologize if some errors are in there and make you cringe lol. I'll be looking through it once in a while and edit the chapters. The tags for this books are: Fantasy, Mythology, Action, Romance (for a short while lol), Magical System, Blood, Gore, War, Military, Betrayal, Gods & Goddesses, Monsters, Death, Martial Arts, Big Women, Dark Skin Characters, LGBTQIA, Heiress Protagonist, Strong Female Characters, Strong Male Characters. Have a great read everyone~🤗 And pls, leave a honestly review lol. Also, I have another book here by the title PUER MORTIS (Child of Death). Please give it a try😁😁

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    Through the Eyes of the Moon
    Urban · Enma Eden
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    The synopsis is the first thing that drew me in. It goes straight to the point and tells the reader whats to come without giving out much details. The book itself is a new kind of experiment with a mix of old elements. Nice work author san

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    The Heiress Mage
    Fantasy · WolfyHime_Writes
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    The book has a nice plot. First chapter really captivated me. You could feel the emotions from the characters 😣😣Great work author san!👍👍

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    The last leaf on the tree
    Urban · igbi9nak5
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    Amazing! This book is great! The words flow with the characters. If you love romance, this is truly a book to feast your eyes upon. Great job author san!😁😁😁😁😁😁

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    A love called hatred
    Urban · ADEPOJU OLAOLUWA ITUNU
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    Only the opening sequence blew me away! God damn! Its short in chapter but still managed to give out a great storyline. Well done author san! You really outdid yourself

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Commented

    I'm already loving this 🤩🤩

    It was the summer of 1882. The sun shedded light upon the interior of the Blightworth Hospital. For some patients within the hospital, it burned their eyes.
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    History · Randy Harsono
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    I love the poetic and psychology feel to this. Although I'm not a religious person, it still resounds in me. Great job author! 10/10. Keep up the good work😁😁

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    THE MISSING ORB OF LIFE
    Fantasy · Pattyegah Ikwue
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    Author here~ This is a shameless review lol. Thank you for giving this book a shot😇😇 The Tag List of this book are: Fantasy, Scifi, Paranormal, Action, Adventure, Psychology, Magik, Part time Female-CEO, Ex-Assassin Protagonist, Assassin Clan, Hitmen, Futuristic Earth, Set in the 22nd Century, Post World War 3, Advance Technology, Supernatural Creatures, Daemons, Angels, Vampires, Werewolves, Kitsunes, LGBTQIA Characters, Black Female Protagonist, Black Male Lead, Strong & Powerful Characters, Death, Gore, and Blood. There might be Romance, but for now the book has to progress first. As this book is divided into 3 volumes, the chapters will be 200+. Please like this review so that others can see the tags!🥰🥰🥰

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    PUER MORTIS (Child of Death)
    Sci-fi · Enma Eden
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    This story is a new experience, ngl. It has a drama approach feel, and although the writer is new to this, they are quite imaginative. My only problem is that since it uses a drama approach it gets confusing. All in all, its a nice approach to fiction. Kudos to the author!!

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    7 Creator Games
    History · GenXPrays
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    Love this! Mafia AU is my thing. Although nit a romance fan, I still find it entertaining😌😌 10/10. Although, there are few errors here and there, as well as gaps in paragraphs, but its nothing too much. Great work author!🥰🤩

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    A Possessive Mafia Leader
    Urban · 4Maggievasiredz
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Replied to PeNNWilaZ_PlayZ

    like I said, the story is great AF. Keep up the good work!😁😁

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    Corridor's of Insanity
    War · Penias siyingwa
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    This is great! Although I rarely read military works, this drew me in lol. The issue with this is the punctuations and spacing. Like I said in chapter one, u don't put full stops were they are meant to be and the same could be said for the commas. Also, try paragraphing your works. Sometimes, a long paragraph just distracts the reader and makes them lost. All in all, this is a great novel🥰

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    Corridor's of Insanity
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Commented

    Great first chapter! Very detailed too. Although, there are some places where u r meant to put fullstops instead to commas, and places where u should have put commas

    Ch 1 SAVANNA’S TEARS:The Arrival
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    Corridor's of Insanity
    War · Penias siyingwa
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Replied to Loliput

    dude 😂😂 no🤣

    Ch 3 2: Outing
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    PUER MORTIS (Child of Death)
    Sci-fi · Enma Eden
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden3yr
    Posted

    Nice story hun! I love a girl who doesn't take shot from anyone. Although the language and writing style confuses me, it's still a great story. Nice work author san😁😁

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    THE LOVE I NEVER KNEW
    Urban · HAJRA N. ABDEL
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