Hi, I'm Mateus, I'm 20yo and I'm from Brazil, I love reading fantasy and decided to start creating my own stuff :)
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Pretty convoluted no? Whatever you tried doing here didn't work, for me at least. Not the biggest fan of dramatic stuff ya know. If I could forget everything I've seen on this chapter it would be a better experience, probably.
Underwhelming MC, boring and predictable skill. Weird and two-dimensional background characters... i'm not really disappointed as I didn't expect much after chapter one.
Pretty underwhelming so far..
You keep giving him conditional powers/powers with long cool downs. Is that the direction you're intentionally going for or is that just because?
Yep. Everything checks out. This is either a Chinese novel or is trying really hard to be one. The whole fair skin cold beauty, the meaningless input from extras. I can see the face slapping coming from a mile away.
The star of heaven of the elite class? What weaboo shit is that lol
He has to cut himself like some degenerate to use this element?
Blood? Are you serious? What a buffoon
I'm not impressed. Nothing particularly new so far and the execution isn't good enough to make up for the lack of creativity.
Oof. Started off a bit cringe unfortunately. I'll read a couple more chapters since I really liked the synopsis. Here's hoping this was a one time thing.