GreenDragon1222

Naming her anything but Naruto doesn't really make sense. Naruto means whirlpool or a topping on ramen, something that represented the Uzumaki greatly. Besides, Minato and Kushina wanted to name their child after the main character in 'Tales of a Gutsy Ninja,' who was named Naruto.

I mean, I think if anyone ate the chakra fruit from the god tree then they would be the strongest character.

Plot

Athena was famous in Greek Mythology for being the best weaver, so I'm comparing her hair to a beautiful spool of wool. If you want to know more go read the ancient myth of Arachne.

Pretty much, I thought cultivating would be powerful enough and she didn't need senjutsu, plus I like to think they would be like oil and water, unmixable.

That's kinda what I was going for, I really liked Irregular at Magic Highs school, (Second intro was dope) and I hated that a ton of people bashed it for Tatsuya and Miyuki's relationship.

Was trying to get his character more of a brotherly-mentor type, but thanks for telling me I'll try and fix this.

Could I have written the fight scene better, this is my first time. Criticism is greatly appreciated.

It isn't about the amount. I like to think that each person has a certain amount of strength in their chakra. Like how a Rasengan using Naruto or a Tailed Beasts chakra would be more powerful than using Sakura's chakra. And following this theory, since the Third is so old, his chakra just does not have the vitality that it once did, making it unfit for a high-level technique like the shadow clone.

If I do romance, it will probably be a lot later in the story. I haven't decided on straight vs yuri yet thought.