AmeStar8
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AmeStar83 years agoPostedLots of plot holes, but I understand what you mean you're going to make an ex.chapter to cover the holes, I suggest you find an editor for your novel, because of your explanation of the background of the world and The strength is already very good, only in the character and story development, please improve.
- AmeStar84 years agoReplied to AmeStar8
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- AmeStar84 years agoCommented
lanjut!
- AmeStar84 years agoReplied to TheCreatorOfRice
yea, im also curious
- AmeStar84 years agoPosted
I Love It. ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️
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Lanjutkan Thor
- AmeStar84 years agoCommented
ITS Begin?