DaoistWill

last chapter it was mentioned it went from 2 to 6

Overall, it is a super well thought out design containing multiple mythos. Story, character, and world are all immaculate. The only downside i have is 2ch/week, but for the extremely high quality of work in these chapters, it is worth the wait

no rizz gang

The overall lack of proper grammar here is super jarring. It's not as a "translated badly" type jar; but more along the lines of, "this was made by a child" Would recommend the author to keep going.. but revisit as you grow and understand sentence structure better.

>with a very simple design. was a very simple design Why.

summed up the capitol was majestic and beautiful yes. we get it can we not repeate the same word vomit three times over?

Repeated whether they are mortal, legendary, or transcendant twice here. we got it in the first half of the sentence. There's no need to add in word fluff

what?

pretty rare for me to just drop a novel but the sentance structure is overall just terrible. i get it, probably not a native english speaker/writer but at the minimum throw it into grammarly to help out. Looks like overall it is successful, so if you have more patience give it a try!

Generally needs a lot of fleshing out, great foundation, but there are too many repeat chapters. Please do not waste your money on this at the current point in time.