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animesh_tewary17dReplied to Pedro_Sousa.
' For now, I should buy some skin lotion and maintain the skin. Beside, I really want six pack. ' An Moyan quickly decided after seeing his distorted body. Time already got him but he had a cheat system so his skin would want back to the youth. Besides, it was one of his dreams to have six packs when he grew older and he wanted to fulfill that childish dream.- animesh_tewary7mthReplied to Young_un_
- animesh_tewary9mthCommented
in the previous chapter he told every one is in q condescending
The reason why he still looked like a middle-aged man was because he was a Foundation Building cultivator! - animesh_tewary9mthReplied to chrysantheater
there is nothing such as villains in this world every thing is about intrest . what i am carving is an mc who is intellectual and have some common sense in him and being mediocre is ok but all the stuff of genric mc makes the hole plot rot , genreally in xianxia , few characteristics which you could try on your new novel specially for xianxia 1 ) let him be average not too godly nor too waste of a talent 2) work on the plots 3) intelligent mc who can plot 4) non harem 5) not naive 6) not the same genric plot making the mc same sword cultivator , instead make him bald donkey 😂( a monk ) 7 ) take some ideas from the classical xanxia 8 ) don't invote the already existing xianxia world follow the basic realms, 9 ) let side character have depth 10 ) dont make the whole population dumb
Ch 25 Author's Thoughts - animesh_tewary9mthCommented
yes it started in a great way but you messed up when you started adding the new cat girl i mean you should start with simple xanxia level of culvation , you messed up overly complecating the characters and not sticking with og the topic is extermly new so there is no need to invate thing . the chatacter devlopment was strangeb
Ch 25 Author's Thoughts - animesh_tewary9mthReplied to StarParagon
nro get some help ! you are really a sadistic
There would never be a little Wine in this world anymore, a bubbly little girl who would scream excitedly at this door's light... - animesh_tewary9mthCommentedCh 14 Is it love?
- animesh_tewary9mthReplied to Aoikiri
hey ! thanks for the recommending
The next morning, his body was found in a river. - animesh_tewary9mthReplied to Aoikiri
hey could u recommend some good novels xianxia once
The next morning, his body was found in a river. - animesh_tewary1yrReplied to TigrallefdetailMy Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial ArtsEastern · I'm Really Not Xu Xian
- animesh_tewary1yrReplied to Raven97
did you find it ?
This book has been deleted. - animesh_tewary2yrCommentedCh 329 Discussion (I)
- animesh_tewary2yrCommentedCh 317 Ye Tian Yun's Decision
- animesh_tewary2yrCommentedCh 361 The Fire Monarch’s Dilemma
- animesh_tewary2yrCommentedCh 81 Fangs Of Inanis
- animesh_tewary2yrCommentedCh 262 The Deal
- animesh_tewary2yrCommentedCh 84 The cold truth