Joseph_Medley
Stay-at-home father of 8, lead Animator for Freedom Art Rebel Studios and owner of Kotas Studios, I have many projects running concurrently at the moment.
Writing
of reading
81
Read books
Badges
11Moments
395
Joseph_Medley1dReplied to XzenoCh 1356 Start Cleaning- Joseph_Medley1dReplied to Anubesetesh
That was my thought, then had to think globally and it made a bit more sense
Baseball pitchers could throw a curveball and football players could curl the ball, but Han Sen was far more talented than the average sportsman. With the imbalance of the egg and its instability in travel, it could be used very effectively against others. - Joseph_Medley1dCommented
That's kind of how throwing things works...
Han Sen was also starting to believe it was almost sentient, as it could follow his commands. All he had to do was take care when throwing it. Before it left his hand in a throw, he just had to influence it in the direction he wanted it to go. - Joseph_Medley3dCommented
Can't do a correction suggestion for some reason, but "ever since" implies uts been a while. It has not, been 3 days.
This was exactly what Daneel had been waiting for. Ever since he had bought the PAM-1 from the store, he had been waiting for the first prompt which would mean that he would have a technique for himself for free just by observing someone. Only, he had never expected that it would be such an incredible technique-one that could increase his potential! - Joseph_Medley3dCommented
So wait, the great great grandfather was also his great great great grandfather 😬
As for the Tulip Family, there is no such thing as a family tree. What Liszt knows is about his great-great-grandfather, who was his grandfather's grandfather's father—at that time, there was neither a Tulip Great Elf nor a Tulip Lesser Spirit in the family, so the surname Tulip didn't exist either. - Joseph_Medley4dCommented
Translation issue? Thought Coral City was the capital of Coral Island?
"Tomorrow, once the Elf Bugs have completed their assimilation, I will accompany the caravan to Coral City. I may be away from Coral Island for a few days, so please see to the affairs of the castle in my absence." - Joseph_Medley4dReplied to Shusendo
True, I had considered perhaps he was comparing it to his arrival when he would have been just passing through
This time, he truly felt the poverty of the commoners' lives. - Joseph_Medley5dReplied to Kamog
I was gonna post similar then read the replies to yers and yerp, it does mention illuminated city and such in the first paragraph. Makes it far less irritating/confusing
If it was like a game, having a dark core granted a person 10 points in the Darkness attribute to start with. This could be increased through certain techniques or items that enhanced that particular attribute. Due to his dark core, Raze's body could easily absorb items, adding to his points. - Joseph_Medley5dCommented
Think that is the most common element of nearly every transmigration story I've read om this platform-same name no matter how unique
His new memories were fragmented. He remembered family names, which seemed pointless, but not their lives or experiences. However, he remembered his name: Raze. - Joseph_Medley5dReplied to Bob_Dole
After reading through a few more chapters, it definitely seems like they are fairies or pixies of some sort. Lends more credence to yer suggestion
Immediately, he saw a "silkworm baby" inside, thicker than a thumb but shorter than an index finger, with pale yellow on its back and green stripes. Compared to a silkworm baby, the Elf Bug was coated in a jade-like sheen that made it look like a wriggling long jade strip, stunningly beautiful. - Joseph_Medley5dReplied to ramon_sigala
yes!
Because his biological father, Earl William Lee of Coral Island, currently served as the Court Equerry at the court, tending to the Sapphire Duke's beloved steeds, one of which was a divine horse mixed with the bloodline of a dragon. - Joseph_Medley5dReplied to Mateus_Philip
True true
Feeling the increasingly near Human Face Rock Snake Ghost, Carlos was extremely loyal and had not slipped away by turning invisible. - Joseph_Medley5dReplied to Bob_Dole
No, just get flagged by the editors if any of my chapters have two sentences similar or two paragraphs w similar content but a ton of these translated stories can repeat the same thing over and over to where it takes up 30%+. Not a complaint when the company actually asks to warn readers of repeat content
The last precious ones were Elf Bugs, representing the foundation of the productive capacity. - Joseph_Medley5dReplied to
Could be
Immediately, he saw a "silkworm baby" inside, thicker than a thumb but shorter than an index finger, with pale yellow on its back and green stripes. Compared to a silkworm baby, the Elf Bug was coated in a jade-like sheen that made it look like a wriggling long jade strip, stunningly beautiful. - Joseph_Medley5dReplied to Bob_Dole
Then an army wouldn't do any good against such a small foe
Therefore, there was no need to worry about the safety of the Peanut Elf Bug. - Joseph_Medley5dReplied to Bob_Dole
Wasn't nitpicking, was genuinely curious if there was another currency being introduced
"Here are the replies from the Earl and Baron, and also the ten Naldas exchanged for the Fierce Earth Dog pelts." - Joseph_Medley6dCommented
What are Naldas and where did they come from? Haven't been mentioned b4 let along as a currency
"Here are the replies from the Earl and Baron, and also the ten Naldas exchanged for the Fierce Earth Dog pelts." - Joseph_Medley6dReplied to Xerotia
Ah ok, that helps a bit
"Alright, that's it for today's lesson." - Joseph_Medley6dCommented
Whelp, laying it out like that completely obliterates any attempt to defend the odds two paragraphs ago
He assumed the probability of an Elf Bug evolving upwards was 1/50, for a Little Minor Elf it was 1/100, for a Greater Elf it was 1/500, and for a Dragon Elf it was 1/1,000. Therefore, the probability of an Elf Bug evolving into an Elf King was 1/2,500,000,000, one in two and a half billion. - Joseph_Medley6dCommented
Sooooo... Is it a legend or unheard of? Kinda contradictory descriptors there...
An Elf Bug might evolve into a Little Minor Elf with one success among dozens; a Little Minor Elf might evolve into a Greater Elf with one success among hundreds; a Greater Elf might evolve into a Dragon Elf with one success among hundreds; as for a Dragon Elf evolving into an Elf King, that had never been heard of.