Jaylon_Whitfield

why are we not focusing on the mc perspective instead of his son it’s really confusing knowin more about tha son then the mc

Im tryba find the logic in him being thwin son that makes zero since tywin would never cheat idc wat anybody say he would never cheat on his wife so wat logic is it for the mc to be tywin son if u wanted him to be tywin son and king make separate the lannister house from everyone else and build his own kingdom or start a rebellion dont jus unrealistic stuff like that

Bruh I’m sorry but I can’t stand the mc I just don’t like his personality it’s like he shows to much emotions for me I like mc who keep a cool head and a pokerface all the time he seem like on of them mc who be a beta simp and blush when a girl flirt with him

A little disappointed at him hiding his strength I know there’s a lot of danger there but I hate when mc hides his strength and I can already tell tha plot the mc gon go down the labyrinth either willingly or not meet Yue save her yatta yatta yatta basically the same thing in every fanfic about this 🤷🏾‍♂️

Yes

Come on author please don’t start with the he hiding his true strength from everybody like that make the story boring why would you hiding your strength? Is he scared when people find out how strong he is they gon come after him if he is he just need to man up and get stronger so you can do whatever he want theres no reason to hide his strength🤨

Can you please make him look different like he could look like cumber

Did u drop this

I feel for a Viking and a king he should have more than one wife at least four or five they should be dacey,sansa,dany,margaery,Melisande

Dude u ova here threaten us to get yo story to rank 20 and shi like nobody gonna read yo shi if u keep doin shi like this posting everything on yo patron like every book u wrote always go on yo patron u might as well just stop writing on here and jus write on yo patron