Monkey_Investment

really, a waste of un needed explanation pf more than 3 chapters. Is it to just expand more story pages? how the attack came and how they ate fighting it all out. why the hell do I want to know all that. boring [img=faceslap]

This is a wonderful story. The suspense of his past, the thrill of the present and the hope of the future. The story has kept the balance between all aspects and it is wonderful without toomuch cringy moments. I like the pace which is not slow not fast and just right for me [img=update]. I hope u guys also will like it after reading

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

the story started good. Hope it will go the same way without too many useless and unnecessary characters to just fill the chapters.

The story is great! But the updation is not consistent. it would be great if the story is updated Daily consistently. Also, a very short chapters.