first chapter seems great. If possible try using websites or softwares for marking out and correcting mistakes cause i felt some awkwardness in certain chapters

this story in my view is not for casual readers who have pretty much no knowledge of physics etc, which for me creates a major hurdle to understand the story.

just amazing, nothing else to say about this great work of art, and since it was adapted to anime actually watching the scenes play out is just amazing.

this story is just amazing, surprised to see such a great effort outside fanfiction.net, a madara story that actually is long and portrays him as the main character is quite rare and i was very happy to get the opportunity to read this work.

hi author just one request please never lock this novel because the reason i never read books on this website is that most of them are locked and being a student i don't have my own money to spend