TK_2000

Really good. Engaging and an interesting plot.

Honestly an Amazing story. Love how the power levels are done and how you’ve handled character development and power development with Apollo and the rest. With how the story is developing it has a lot of potential and doesn’t seem to be even half way yet. My only complaint is the upload schedule as I’m not sure if you’ve said anything about it but it’s been a month without a new chapter and there isn’t any consistency when you do upload so I hope that changes but looking forward to the next chapter.

This was a good serious but this rose thing kinda sucks. You basically made her way more powerful than she would be after killing a god and just given her plot armour. It would be better if you just got rid of her already or took her out of the story till a later date because now all your doing is having her kill people while she is basically invincible. Otherwise though I’v loved the series

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I dont think anyone should be treating animals as their *** slaves😂

My only problem is this guy is upposed to be a genius bUt youve made him seem like and idiot and a coward most of the time. id suggest laying back On the surprised and panic moments and make him showcase more strenth.

Absolutley love the idea and hope it continues to go far. like the fact that no matter what he never wuite reaches the pinnacle and evertime he gets close he discovers power scaling far above his

Absolutely libe this book. even after 400 pages im still hooked and cant wAit for the daily chapters. keep ip the good work and ill keep reading.

Love the Outlook of an orc and the fact that Hes not a goody twoshoes but is also not completely unforgivIng. perfect balance. Keep up the good work