thank you for appreciating my twisted sense of humor. :) I must also thank you in that your positive feedback is helping me to finally finish climbing out of the hole I fell into ?

not completely . just on a pause right now while I was working on another book due to only having 3 active readers when I was originally publishing it. I have plans to get back to it around easter when I will have time off from my "day" job and be able to devote time to both books.

Foxner sorry for the grammar mistakes. A lot of it is due to me only having 2 hours each day to produce each chapter before having to leave for work. So I make what edits I can as I am typing each chapter each day but prioritize spelling when time gets short. Also, I do try to make sure I'm at least close to accurate when relating most things. But I hope you are still able to enjoy the story.

but thanks for the review.

I've never been good at romance so I'm only minimally touching that subject. And the only reason it insists on the romance tag is because of having a female lead. lol

the main characters are being developed nicely but the secondary characters are slower to develop. hints of the dragons to come are slowly being dropped.

See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

first few chapters might bore folks wanting to jump straight into the action but the character's backstories were explained while the characters were being developed. but once the characters get introduced things start getting interesting. btw, I tried to be honest but I am the author so my point of view might be a touch biased. so if you think differently (good and bad) post your own review or comment and I'll try to improve.

thank you dixeled. hopefully other readers will follow your example and start leaving comments and reviews. [img=recommend]

congrats on the Spring Creation contest they just announced winners/nominations(?) for. you truly did deserve it because, as someone who has literally read over 500 books in my lifetime, I can see how talented and dedicated you are to this book. now if you could boost production by giving up on sleep and learning how to write while using the toilet or taking a shower you might win over some of your more impatient haters. lol

try to use the negatives as constructive criticism to help you grow when possible and keep in mind when looking at the unconstructive ones that the haters are most likely subconsciously jealous that you are doing better and are better recognized than they are or that you had the courage to publish and keep writing a story and they didn't. so let their problems stay with them and not become your problems too. especially with all of the changes going on in your personal life right now.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

are you making enough royalties off this story to not worry about the day job yet? cause you've written a very captivating story and I've always been eagerly waiting for your nightly updates.

excellent novel with good development of the main characters along with in depth descriptions of actions, personality twists, and plot points. only negative is the proofreader and editor missing autocorrect and/or spellcheck substitutions of correct words with incorrect words.