Emily_Gates

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Emily_Gates4 years ago
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Why cant Beth just live in the castle?? At least part time like Sophie!
Ch 222 In the night- Part 1
The Crown's Obsession
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Emily_Gates4 years ago
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*the Out
This gentleman stepped into our humble apothecary shop, not to pick up anything, but to ask how he could get towards out. Our town never saw a single traveler but for a fortnight, there have been a surge of a pristinely dressed population looking to get to the outside.
Two Gardens
Fantasy · Emily_Gates
Emily_Gates4 years ago
Replied to Vividly_Dawn
Because shes being Psychologically abused??
Her hand moved up to touch her neck. The King had not killed her. Not yet, as he had given his word to her, but she didn't believe him. The man made a deal with her about entering the maze to find the exit, where in the end, she found out there wasn't another exit to begin with.
The Crown's Obsession
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Emily_Gates4 years ago
Commented
“With brown hair” makes it wordy 😊
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The Crown's Obsession
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Emily_Gates4 years ago
Commented
“In the lonely corridor” Makes it wordy 😊✌🏼
"He's nothing but a crude man acting like a cave person," Madeline muttered under her breath while fuming quietly by herself as she walked alone in the lonely corridor.
The Crown's Obsession
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Emily_Gates5 years ago
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The writing could use proof reading but i honestly dont see the small mistakes because of how captivating the story and its flow is!
Married to the Devil's Son
Fantasy · JasmineJosef