RichardTheRat

Torrifex reminds me of a 40k tyranid creature name.

So it's about time I asked. Will you ever get back to writing the story? I loved the developments in this story and one of the better written ones in English atleast.

This all I felt for these last 2 chapter, and I can't wait for more.

Good story if you want quality to quantity, I have got wierd tastes in books so don't rely on me to give accuracy. But the characters feel like they exist no matter the creature or species and aren't just there to die. With how nice the quality of writing is, and how much thought is put into characters even when put on the back burner you can still remember characters. Only issues i noticed were the first 10 chapters have a bit of a up and down kind of pacing, which feels wierd. And we already established our character wasn't really living a lets' say 'fulfilling' life but he still had one which wasn't touched on much. Another is the writing for them is that of a writer experimenting and getting better so expect it. Other than That a great book don't know how long the Author will continue it for but at this pacing I would say from what I have seen like 35-45 more chapters underground at least. Don't think this is accurate and I am probably wrong but this is what I think and I am trying to help the author more than readers. Anyways 4.6 out of 5 stars would reread it when it ends like a year later.

Compared to other stories getting 2-3 of these chapters each week is really nice. Reason is it feels like a actual story and not people spamming chapters everyday to keep peoples attention. Which isn't necessarily bad but not as refined as these.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

Continue, I never really liked Gundam so your story allows me to explore it through a characters eyes that is completely different. I never liked it due to the idea that a kid that has never even used a Gundsm allows him to take down trained professionals, from what i usually saw atleast.

same i would like more please.