Stephen_Risk

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Stephen_Risk2 hours ago
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Activated not advocated
"I can't waste to much time on you, you are not the one I need to defeat." Quinn said, as he advocated the skill of his shoes. A puff of smoke appeared and now, there were three Quinns standing in the same place.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Stephen_Risk3 months ago
Commented
There instead of Thier, which is also not a word in English as far as I know
What came as a big surprise to everyone, was that Jessica had volunteered herself in. At the Green city, thier was a giant pillar, a tower made of metal sticking out from the sea. Thier were many of these that built up the pathways, the land mass and the city that everyone lived on.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Stephen_Risk5 months ago
Commented
I think you meant phalange, it’s the phalanx bone but phalange is the more commonly used term
In the space of two heartbeats, all the undead bats were on the ground, and this time for good. They had been shredded in so many pieces that the biggest was the size of a single human phalanx.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
Stephen_Risk6 months ago
Commented
Easy: “Manus” (m-anus)
Truth to be told, Brinja had searched for a Magus equivalent, but to no avail.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
Stephen_Risk2 years ago
Commented
Large and gigantic? Why the repetition of two words that mean the same thing?
Eventually Quinn could see a beautiful sight in front of him. There was a watery lake inside the castle grounds. It was large, and gigantic. There was a pathway that was built out and a small little platform where one could sit out and enjoy the view of the lake.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Stephen_Risk2 years ago
Commented
Arturo if a boy, Leona if a girl
Ch 2060 A name?
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Stephen_Risk2 years ago
Commented
Probably want to just use forge here instead of forgery, forge is where you craft things and forgery is a fake copy of something that is passed off as being real.
Quinn stood a floor under the main lab where Logan's base would be. This was where the forgery was, with two large thick doors leading to the forgery. Rather than opening the door, Quinn used his shadow travel skill to travel underneath and reappear on the other side.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Stephen_Risk2 years ago
Commented
Stingers not singers
The next moment, the three singers from the ground fell onto the floor.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Stephen_Risk2 years ago
Commented
Halt not help
The fighting had spread over several streets, on top of buildings, and even more throughout the city. Still, not everything was in favour of the Dhampirs as their progress was coming to a somewhat help due to one particular reason.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Stephen_Risk2 years ago
Commented
Mitchell not Mithcell
"They are dangerous, and now is not the time. It is best if we wait." Although she said this, Muka still felt slightly nervous, and Mithcell, who was standing closest to her, could hear her say a couple more words quietly under her breath. "I think…"
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga