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Ralph_Williams2yrCommentedpretty darn short chapters. shouldn't be "pay by chapter" but word count. Most other novels I've read have chapters about twice in length... paying by the chapter could inspire authors to write far more short chapters instead of longer ones because they get paid much more often. Rules need established or I'll abandon webnovel
Ch 468 Dealing With The Group- Ralph_Williams2yrCommented
As I read Abe the Wizard, while "The Hobbit; An Unexpected Journey" rerun is on cable TV in the background, I find a Tolkein tribute 8n these pages with the introduction of Master Forger Thorain Oakenshield...cheesey but YAY!
"The mighty Master Thorin Oakenshield had arrived!" - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
getting boring
"Let her go; no one from the same tier can overcome her powers. And if she's that confident she can beat him, after everything we've seen thus far, perhaps we should place some faith of our own in her." The King of Day believed she had what it took, so he decided to follow her in support. - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
seems Han Sen is full of surprises. Now his mother's family rivals the most elite....hmmm
Han Sen did not know what to say in response. After a few moments of silence, he had a question he wanted to ask. "If your family is that powerful, how can we be bullied by our second uncles and aunts?" - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
I think han Sen is going to figure this out pretty soon.
"There's no use thinking about it now. I cannot even absorb the Life Geno essence." Han Sen openly mocked himself. - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
How many licks does it take to get to the center of.....?
Han Sen was in his room. As he held it in his hands, he repeatedly licked it. But no matter how many times he tried, nothing happened. He licked and licked, but it did not melt. - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
hmmm...
"You guys stay here, I'll go get the Sky Falcon myself." Before Han Sen arrived, he had already conducted a lot of research, and he knew Chen Ran wasn't lying. But he didn't come here without a plan up his sleeve. - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
oops
The jellyfish's tentacles then encircled Han Sen and tied him up. He felt electricity surge from the jellyfish, making his body convulse and cramp. Unable to control himself, his mouth opened to gulp in the seawater. - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
Han Sen is a beast
"Brother Han, you have very impressive skills. I can't believe your skills denied Blackgod the time to perform any actions," Li Xinglun complimented him. - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
Black God is doomed
He could also get his Inferno Bull back. Han Sen would not let this opportunity pass him by. - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
interesting
"Yes, I looked. It is a sacred-blood class Snow-Lady beast soul. The abilities of the Snow-Lady beast soul are quite special. It does not increase one's strength, just one's speed. It also has the ability to reduce one's temperature, but that seems rather useless to me. It would most likely just become a problem. I don't think it's worth trading a Berserk beast soul for a Snow-Lady beast soul. Plus, you had argued with Blackgod before," Li Xinglun said severely. - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
Chapters are coming pretty darn slow
Obviously, the stone which was being sacrificed here, Lear, didn't have any idea about it. - Ralph_Williams3yrReplied to Rabiddoughnuts
50 chapters does not make a book. At 1200 words per chapter (which I read was average on this platform) and 90,000 words being an average novel in general... That's 75 chapters per "novel" or 15 bucks. Average price on kindle is about 6 bucks per book...this is 2.5 X more
Ch 257 Last hit - Ralph_Williams3yrCommented
Thos story translation could be better. MUCH better. What I'm sure is a fascinating and exciting read is dry and difficult to follow with the incorrect use of grammar, words and sentence structure. The translation is COMPLETELY emotionless
The report was about the failure of his group to steal the core materials of the golden automatons. Their group was trained and had even received special mana artifacts just to steal all the cores. Unfortunately, the leader of the twelve had gotten too greedy as he didn't stop his subordinates to retreat after retrieving the cores. - Ralph_Williams3yrPosted
Great read. Love the cliffhangers. Cant stop reading the story. This is definitely a unique fantasy story mixing in several origional (to me) ideas. Character dungeons and dragons-ish if you ever played the game... Gaining strength and experience as you accomplish more tasks, complete goals and gain experience.
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