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Well, that's why I choose to use simple sentences rather than complicated ones. English is not my first language after all. Let me know with your comments if everything is clear after these edits.

Tomorrow :)

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Alright, I'll edit them. Thanks!

I see, some readers find this a bit clunky(I think). Can you point out those sentences that you found hard to read? This is my first story, so I'd like to know what are those and I'll pull my effort to optimize the sentence structures.

*You're welcome! Shame on me, lol!

Your welcome! I'm in the same boat with you as well. The struggles of not being native in english, thus, not my first language. Like, I got confident when I finished my chapter in google docs thinking this is probably good. But when my chapter is already published, my sweat floods like crazy! So nervous since my chapter has now been read by my small readers collected around the world, hahaha! I heard about string theory(just heard, like just a phrase of it, lol!). But just today, I tried to search and read about that and… my head exploded! it's too much for me, lol! From what I understood, like all—aye, I can't let others what's going on. Though, I'm still trying to understand what really is string theory, it's complex, but it tickles the fascinations that—