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Nick and Nat feel so hollow in this writing and your constants get mixed but the Symbiote has a proper direction the only thing to reveal is how you take in battle scenes, dialogue emotions, and how he/they react to such situations overall improve and conquer keep up the good fight of dieing literature [img=recommend]

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Good idea, keep up the great work

It looks good for the first two chapters. I just hope it's an OP character, he deserves it. And make sure you have your time management down unlike me

This book is is Beautiful in its telling and doesn't hold back in its description of gore and death with emotions. keep it up so I can give power stones

The character is perfect, backstory has a perfect setup, the only mistake I see is the him/her mix up other wise keep the chapters coming and you'll be rolling in power stones soon

Thank you for your time in writing this book and shall you drown in power stones

have fun and good chapter

danka.

Perfect starwars fanfic the only thing bad is an upload schedule but that is given since people have circumstances...............................

Nova,Sol,Helio all good nam3s

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Great start to a start up please continue . .......................y9sddyodlhxupcydydkhxigxitxiggxohxyoxoyxohxoyxoyxohdlycouxohxhodoucyoxyodoydyod

thx

I like it when a plan comes together