I think the drastic change was a terrible mistake. I also dont understand why the author’s sister is now writing the story.

I was a little reluctant to start this book because of the title, but its really engaging! The character development, interpersonal relationships, pace, and plot twists are incredible. I look forward to reading it every day.

That was beautiful.

Very creative, but please learn to use spell check, and get an editor.

I love all the Characters! The relationship development is stellar, including all the details of the things they like and think. The culinary Paragraphs are ao interesting!

Outstanding Character complexity, development, and pacing. Wonderful female lead! This story is very well written and engaging. Excellent all the way around.

Thus chapter dis a really good job of staying teue to the characters’ natures. Someone definitely wants to change the heirarchy of the wife status and shes not even a wife yet!

Excellent character development. these paragustay true to the characters’ personalities.

That would be a great twist Marry her then send her to fight on his behalf.

Its interesting that both women have a strength that the future King (keeping positive!) really needs in his queen compassion and strategy. So it sounds like the first wife has some learning And growing up to do in order to stay the Only wife and be worthy of that title