Jesper_Jones
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And Dongflinger, the Sweetromancer
I am the Lorax, look out for the trees
Yes, the non-psychopathic way
Like I said, still enjoy the story, but I will give an example, but keep it vague so that there are no spoilers. Getting embarrassed they ALL react the same way. 90% of the time it results in stammering. I don’t know about you, but this is rare for me to see. I have seen people laugh it off, grow angry, and either yell or bluster, or mor commonly shut down a little. Yet, for some reason, ALL of these women stammer? Not going to go into other smaller examples, but this is the big one to me. It doesn’t kill the book, but just shows that author can grow their writing, and work on better emerging themselves on exactly how the character would act in different situations
Of course I saw this. If he has I His memories, why is he surprised?? He literally has an in depth knowledge of the previous owner. I understand excitement, but surprise really makes no sense. Especially since the dude literally just transmigrated across the freaking universe to a new body. This should overshadow everything. He is now part of a beasttaming world. Either you transmigrate, and are so new, that just this surprises you, but beast grades don’t matter much, or you fully synchronize with the old memories, and a MONTHS long plan from the memories is not a surprise. You don’t get to have it both ways.
He is surprised by this? He just died and woke up in the other dudes body. He has no context for surprise
I love the storyline, growth, and system designs. if you like stories with good growth mechanics, this one ticks a lot of the boxes and love to read. I only have two problems: Main item is the female characters all feel the same. Yea they have their own quirks, but when you get to their ‘personal’ moments, they become the same as all the other girls. Second item is the timeline. the book makes it clear that weeks, maybe a month has passed, but suddenly mentions how it is months and months down the road. There was no time skip, it just suddenly all the things that took weeks changed to months. I still love the story, but those were my quips
Please tell me she starts falling for the ent, and they confess to the wrong thems, and both get shot down
American here, I remember when living in northern states, lunch was more of a fluid thing, maybe being later. “Supper” was what they called dinner time. This was over 10 years ago though, so I can’t remember the details of what they called everything
The bridge in Wakefield
No, the word is right, the sentence just needs a comma
How in the heck does everybody know where the HIDEout is??
I read ‘Meowler’ so I was betting on cat people, or Meowth