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I'm not going to lie I haven't read a single thing I just wanted to do this so yeah I might read it so I hope it's good yeah that's all I got to say

I'm not going to lie this man he is so cool with it like he can get any good right now he basically just driving her probably but he still got the moves

I don't care what anybody says this is a 10 out of 10 I will give it a hundred if I can I love this this thing right here is so funny I love the fighting Man all the characters are funny

first chapter can use more work

it actually got better I actually like his very much I like how the character is running I like the fighting and how they explain things to writing could use a little bit more work but is is good for right now

ok I will

it is good for right now I like it but it starts off bad

I can't wait to read this sorry I'm already writing it cuz I think I might know how it's going to do so I hope it does well wish me luck I hate for this to be bad

the story the video game idea is so played out I mean but this this right here is pretty good for right now but I have to keep reading to see how it goes and yeah I hope it gets better

this is so I don't know how to say it