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Soul_in_Distress21dCommentedMach 1.5 (supersonic)
[Speed: 540 m/s]- Soul_in_Distress21dCommented
the speed of sound is 343 m/s for context.
[Speed: 390 m/s] - Soul_in_Distress1yrCommented
is clangorous an actual word?
A clangorous metallic noise rang out as a large door closed shut behind, and darkness enveloped my vision. - Soul_in_Distress1yrCommented
Toopack? Any relation to Tupac
He pointed to the folder that the woman was clutching tightly, "But I can say with certainty that I don't believe that this man will do! First, it was Hudson, then that Toopack fellow, and now this man? When are you going to choose a soldier!?" - Soul_in_Distress1yrCommentedCh 75 CHAPTER 75: The first Match
- Soul_in_Distress1yrCommentedCh 70 CHAPTER 70: Meet Green
- Soul_in_Distress2yrCommentedCh 63 CHAPTER 63: Now You see me…Now you don’t.
- Soul_in_Distress2yrCommentedCh 60 CHAPTER 60: Betrayal
- Soul_in_Distress2yrCommentedCh 55 CHAPTER 55: Benefits Of Snooping
- Soul_in_Distress2yrPosted
So I've read through about 50 chapters of this book amd so I'd like to leave my thoughts for anyone who wants to pick up this book. First off, the beginning 15 chapters aren't great in terms of writing or storytelling (my opinion based off other novels I've read) but after you get through those first set, things start to pick up and the writing gets better, the characters are more developed and the author starts to really show some pretty good worldbuilding. Second, I like how there isn't a system or star ranking style that defines everything. that trope is overused and so this is a nice difference. Also the Mc isn't some conniving or overly smart but poor dude. he is pretty average and makes average mistakes and choices at first which i think gives his character more room to grow and more relatable. Overall it's a pretty rough start so far but it gets better every chapter. there are only 50 chapters as of writing this so there is so much more that could happen
- Soul_in_Distress2yrCommentedCh 19 Another Day
- Soul_in_Distress2yrCommentedCh 53 CHAPTER 53 : Fai-Ah
- Soul_in_Distress2yrCommentedCh 50 CHAPTER 50: The Head
- Soul_in_Distress2yrCommentedCh 48 CHAPTER 48: Lost Gods
- Soul_in_Distress2yrCommented
unusual name choice. Carol is andromodis but is usally ony used for dudes
"Alright, my name is Carol, starting for one month, I will be teaching you a basic longsword art, the training will be hellish so if there is anyone who would like to chicken out, I'll allow it." She said as she scanned us. - Soul_in_Distress2yrCommented
nice way to break the fourth wall
"If this was a book, I would definitely like to go back and start all over again," He muttered to himself, with closed eyes no longer hoping for a miracle, as he prepared himself to jump out of the circle and jump to his death, - Soul_in_Distress2yrCommentedCh 17 CHAPTER 17: The Darklands
- Soul_in_Distress2yrCommentedCh 16 CHAPTER 16: A Ring Of Fire